The start was very enjoyable.
Writing is at "smile evily"/"cooly" level.
The storytelling gets ridiculous, at least the romantic aspect of it. I abhor Emma's existence, its just nonsensical. The rest is fine, nothing remarkable, just reminds me of old school stories. Angels, demons, kings and queens. The PLOT got annoying so I just dropped it.
Dude it gets good at chapter 99999 trust me bro
This story saddens me. Its a nice world, settings, premisse. The baseline story is good, the author come up with some good stuff but then he trashes that in favor of more repetitive arcs.
There's this arc where a big tree pops up, MC comes to It after a tournament and do his thing. Then instead of figuring out the tree, MC goes to another f*ck*n tournament!! And these d*mn tournaments happen so often its annoying. You think he'd go back to the tree (since he actually f*ck*d a lot of people with what he did) but NO!! The whole thing is forgotten by the meth addict author.
Author decided It was a good Idea for the MC to have a student, only to show how the MC and the author are cut from the same cloth. He'll barely acknowledge she exists till the author forgets her existence as well.
The shop... Its like It doesnt even matter. MC is short on cash / energy. Needs It. Will he keep his store open to sell food? F*CK NO! If there's no slot for training, shop closes. Hardly sells pets...
Good end ?
Yes it is my guy yes it is
you should all definitely read this, absolutely great if I do say so myself
Great Read sometimes a bit confusing but its a must!
Amazing and captivating story
Can't wait to see what this book holds
I just read both book. Great read. When is the continued books coming out?
cute story but the grammar errors got annoying. def enjoy a happy ending.
good job!
please update it has been almost a week since your last one