this is my first time writing comments so there can b mistak soI don't know why i like this novel i cagul read to 10 chapter but i read more &more now i am waiting for a update this novel dra people after reading little they want to read more like what happen next but I don't like adult type novels in the first place but this novel quite something but in this novel the character i like is mia
Writing a review for the fp, seems interesting from the synopsis though, I'll probably give it a shot
This novel is an absolute delight. The storytelling is smooth, and the way everything unfolds is just captivating. I'm looking forward to more chapters. Truly a remarkable read.
just here to review for a fastoass event
It’s seem a good story, waiting to see how it will develop
I am trying to change the recommended algorithm to stop suggesting these. I do not have anything against this genre as a whole, but I want the recommendations to be something I am more likely to read and this just got caught in the crossfire
So far a solid story with good back ground an enjoyable read.
While the plot, characters and world setting sound absolutely amazing, I find it just unbearable to read. Grammar is passable, but there's 0 flow in the writing. It's like having amazing ideas but none of the skills to execute them.Random conversations happen that have no relation to the current scene (or maybe just added as an afterthought by the author? that's supposed to give a little bit of insight to character quirks? unfortunately, it's done so badly...)I have a HUGE problem with the pacing and flow of the story (at 6!!! chapters!!!) so while the story really, genuinely sounds interesting, I just can't pick it up. ( T T )Disclaimer: I'm not that good at English myself, but I'm a very picky reader. It's just how I feel (shrug)
Dear Author Please update more I can't wait
Army Building, Business Management, Harem, MC Pevert, War.......................................................................................................
I couldn’t read more than the first sentence... the english is really terrible... I don’t read very well english(because i ´m french) and i am quit tolerent with novel english quality but this one is... bad... It need editing like seriously :(
Well I’ve read up to latest Ch5 so far I like it, but there’s one thing that bugs me is he created a world and yet has no idea about the mysterious power of the world he create.