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All in all it's a fun read. Not original, fast paced, MC is likable. If you like this kind of stories, OP cultivator in modern world delivering "justice
Great so far. Found it in the WPC section. I hope the author continues it. He seemed to have a lot of unfinished writings. The novel is great, not a lot of things happening at the same time or not too many exciting things but the fights and the interactions felt really good.
A minute of your time if you please. The reviews talking about the stupidity of the main character and plot armor in the earlier chapters is true. The reason I am not re-writing them is because i don't want to change things and then the later chapters are filled with plotholes. I am not asking for you to drag yourself through those chapters, if you can't take that stuff, then my advice to you is not to waste your time. Seeing as this is my first novel, I would like to think that my writing will get better over its course. This review is just to ward off less tolerant people, instead of them reading the novel and leaving a permanent negative review about something that I am working/have already worked on in the later chapters. I welcome criticism if it will help me improve my writing skills, but having the rating of my novel lowered because of a situation that is being solved/already been solved is just depressing. If you read to this point, thank you for your time. Hopefully, this review will not cause any misunderstandings
Writing needs improvement especially in the grammar area but other than that this story is amazing on its own. The idea is very interesting and each chapter keeps you going. I hardly notice the mistakes because I enjoyed reading this. Hope you don't drop!
another copy-paste novel... How do they even screen their webnovels before it goes to pilot reads? There are better novels before that got scrapped out due to unexplained reasons maybe the company should resurrect those novels rather than putting another cloned novel.
A novel screaming china Nambawan, china stronk, china good people, etc. looks like the author wants to suck ccp balls. what a shame this was a good novel too but was ruined.
is there going to be second book about Marcus the little prince? it was a book that I could not put down. I loved the twists in the storyline and the characters were amazing. this is eye catching and draws you into it so you feel apart of the story.
Beautiful read
So riveting I couldn't put it down. I am now ready for book 2
Your writing skill is amazing ! You captured both their emotions so well !!! And don’t forget the HOT stuff lol ! Goodness I hope she feel love soon ! Can’t wait for tomorrow chapter
Great story