wow the story line is amazing am completely hooked. Good work author more updates please
Oh boy here we go.This nivel would deserve 4 stars if not for the bad grammar, although light novels are not measured with the same weight as full books publications, is still a big factor.The plot has its degree of originality, the secondary and antagonist characters are neither all smart and sly nor stupid and agraseve but instead they are a balanced combination of both, like in real life, there is not shortage of idiots that take actions based on instad gratification or pride, but there are also people that will think before acting and realize the benefits and dangers of situations, instead of throwing theur life loke idiots to the MC.MC is not bad, just that his apathic personality is not for everyone taste, he came to the current world when he was on a mission, he had a life and purpose back home and he wants to return, so he doesn't attach much to the people in his current world, he stopped giving a F.The world setting is quite original, yet a bit messy to understand, but I like that instead of a info dump of 5 paragraph describing the world, we get to understand it on information bits placed through the narrative, itbfeels more natural and makes sence, info dumping is something many LN and WN writers do, delivering block of info needs to be properly done or it will negatively impact your work.Finally, update stability is, well, could be better.
The book has a nice start to it, it is easy to understand since the writer gives an explanation of everything. The characters and plot are well done. I recommend it to anyone who like a good novel from weak to strong.
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If you don't have a good level of english then pass on this novel. Plenty of the words used are wrongly writen, especially the use of were - where - we're or your - you're - yours, etc. The use of ',' is also trashy.Writing quality is deplorable.That aside, characters dont really mean much emotionally. You see them, they die. Thoigh I have never read a novel with a main character like this so it's kinda nice.Cultivation is a mess but I dont really care personally. Never really paid attention to it.To me this novel is just to kill time and read without pondering too deeply while at the same time training your english to find spelling mistakes.cheers
The plot thrills me, and the characters are well written. You also could see the author's improvement in every chapter.Really recommend this story for everyone 9/10, I love it..
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The novel is okay but the MC is quite disappointing. i was going into the novel thinking that it was going to be about a alchemy store but it is not. The mc barely sell anything out of his store and just has the guild do it at exterme discounts that make no sense.The author says the MC get better after chapter 50 but the story turns into a op mc going dungeon raiding for the next 50 chapter and has nothing to do with the store.
This Novel had so much potential but was ruined by every character that isn’t an ally of the MC. Nobody uses their brain unless they’re on the MC’s side.Every character is his enemy as well, haven’t seen a single neutral character yet except a clan leader but that’s the minimum he’s 400 years old. Everyone else just slanders the MC and basically 20% of the dialogue of this novel (free chapters) is just random characters insulting the MC for no apparent reason at all, (6 Year old MC btw) (he’s not even 6 yet but that just makes it worse) Anyways, unless someone tells me this nonsense stops I can’t bring myself to pay just to read something that is clearly triggering me….
The story summary has intrigued me very much, will definitely check it out! The novel world is vast!
Writing quality is alright but needs an editor to make scenes transition better. Most of the time you don't realize a time skip has happened or where everyone is.
Story development is okay. Nothing to write home about but it's tiresome to keep seeing every man with powers turn into a *** maniac.
Character design is utter shit. The mc is a child prodigy yet does the most reckless things despite having an army behind him. Dude has been in too many life threatening situations that are due to his utter recklessness/stupidity.
Updating stability is ok.
World background is good.
All in all I would read this if a decent editor reigned in the bad and spaced out the story. As it is now, it is bad.