My favorite book at this moment. I find the writing style easy on appreciate
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nice first chapter!I will continue to see how the story develops !!!!
Great book, writing quality is 5.0. You are going to be a great writer, try updating daily you will surely see the results
Don't mind me, I am just trying to help this story get over the first hurdle, to find willing readers to join me on a wild ride. (Also forgive me for being shameless...)Key Points When Reading This Story:– Love Story: A love story between two classmates that becomes a challenge for others in the class. They will have many struggles to overcome.– Class System: Each student will have a unique growth trajectory. The main character will face more difficulties than others as he needs to open his closed heart to start accepting others.– Character Growth: The main character must change to fulfill his role, but will he succeed? That's for you to find out.– Harem: I have debated whether to include a harem. I will use it if necessary, mind you, this is a different world with different rules. It will be done in moderation and only if the need arises. (Just because I introduce a girl doesn’t mean she will be added automatically.)– Monster Taming: There will be a whole lot of that. I enjoy anime and drawing, so you may see various images of how each monster evolves and gets stronger.– A Lot of Pictures: Please check the chapters closely, as images will be posted at times to illustrate various settings or characters. This will give you a better idea of how they look and help reduce unnecessary descriptions, allowing more focus on the action.– Update Schedule: The story will be updated daily, as of now a week's worth of drafts is already scheduled. I will work on my flow and speed and, if possible, aim for double releases on weekends. Having a job and university studies makes writing hard but I have previously written 3-5k words daily.Anyway, enjoy the story. Also, I love interacting with readers so go ahead and ask anything. Peace.
Congratulations!Why? Because you’ve stumbled upon this little gem.Now, let's dive into what this humble author has to share.Regarding the novel, the story actually begins from Chapter 20 onwards, so please give it a read till then before deciding if it's for you or not.Things really start moving after that, and you'll meet all the key characters as the story gains momentum.Also, if you have any questions regarding the story, feel free to comment here.
It's all a bit disjointed with time skips, dreams, memories and characters that are never explained.
Probably one of the best, if not the best novel on WN. Amazing story and world building, and fleshed put and believable characters. Honestly only 2 instinces of me even slightly disliking this novel, and they were really, REALLY, nitpick-y. Overall 10/5 novel, makes reading other novels hard for me. The week wait feels excruciatingly painful, but overal worth it. An instant read of you haven’t read already.
well done :)
There are like 20 reviews from two people giving this 5 stars and I have to put my foot down.I’ve read up to chapter 18 and I want to blow my brains out. Wanna know why?It’s not lacking chapters. It’s not the decent grammar or the general narrative style.It’s the overuse of clichés, emphasis of “plans,” and useless characters. Also, the dreadful POV shifts.For clichés, we got MC Mark, a “badass” anti-hero/hero mix. We got a random mother and daughter burden for escort. Then there’s the strong and uncooperative love interest with her friend. Oh, and I almost forgot! There’s the unnamed male employee as the servant. Some bus is in an accident and then zombies come out from it. It’s the apocalypse and somehow, the zombies have hacks that allow them to bypass crowds and kill any good guy with a gun. No police or guards! No phone service, so you can’t call for help!That means everyone is getting slaughtered! MC steps in to lead everyone to safety! Oh no! Someone needs help, so he goes to save them with his badass one-handed shotgunning skills! He got it from a zombie guard that happened to attack him!But he can’t just save them without showing how all other guys are trash! A mom gets grabbed by dying man! How she is still alive when running from zombies with her daughter? Who cares! Love interest shows she can fight, but MC saves her because he must be better!Oh? A rich fatty goes crazy and holds everyone hostage in his base? He locks out MC and kills someone with a gun? Guess it’s detour time for MC to go save them because they’re helpless without him! No need to try and reason with the fatty.Don’t worry! It’s all according to “plan!” MC loots a place and makes the path secure. Oh, a detour to the detour? Oh, it’s time to save a new love interest? Oh, we have to get the hero a heroic entrance instead of assassinating the gangsters. We’ll have the MC talk to the Boss as he r*pes the girl because this is the “plan!”What!? The Boss has a gun? No worries! MC knew and wanted to make sure by talking to the gangsters! He just wanted to get a better shot. What? He only shot off the Boss’s arm and kicked a gangster’s balls? What “plan” is this?How will he survive now? Oh? It was instant KO? As expected of MC, the other gangsters run away since they luckily don’t have guns. Now the MC is the hero. Let’s have TWO chapters of FLASHBACKS to show this pampered and beautiful love interest having a hard time with her family, friends, and fiancé.Don’t worry! Literally disarming the Boss was part of the plan! He’s bleeding out, but don’t worry! MC must have a moment with his love interest! Oh, the Boss died? Time for a new “plan!” The fleeing gangsters attracted the zombies away? As expected of the “plan!” They never could have lured them back! Even if they did, MC had “plans” for it!Ignore that his people had to kill zombies attracted by his gunshot! Hey, that mom can come over here and clean up the love interest. That gangster Boss r*ped her all over just by himself! She’s coated in his slimy seed!Great! We’re ready to move on! Ignore how the daughter keeps up. Man-servant has been carrying the injured mother the whole time! Do you understand how tedious and discomforting that is? It’s a droll format. It relies on cliché encounters to build up a harem team because the author doesn’t want to have MC alone. We go back and forth between characters only so the MC is no longer the focus of the story. It’s fractured but whole, like a fractured butt hole. Incomplete, but complete; empty, but full.
This slave ... He just a slave, even he get abuse, i hate slave like him but, if i think much more, he just a victim. What he have done? Why do God put him in this creazy place? It's sound funny, he just good person and get abuse.