Great. .
Omor Yoruba atata bro you deserve 5 stars I want to work on a novel of a guy transported to the world of martial arts and I plan to make the guy a Nigerian boy Even using my name Can we do this together
The progression of events is annoyingly slow, so that if I don't collect two chapters, I might die from waiting. The progression of events, especially in the fights, is slow, and you only show one character in the chapter, or four at most, and you forget the rest of the characters.
This is too good. It is splendid although a bit rushed, it is still. Color me silly, author but they can't have Elara?
Touching novel. The interaction between jannah and her sister is if not anything touching . This is a well written novel, although more centred on character building, its's topnotch .Highly recommend !!
Author here ?. These is one of my very first book, just realised I can't post without rating it i put 5 star hehehe. Please don't be shy to write your comments so I can improve the story. Thank you, everyone is appreciated. Bye.
truly best, I am impressed just by chapter 1 author.you have my full support.
Thank you!! I'm waiting for more new chapters!!
Gostei da nova história da vida do Ace ele parece ter mais amigos, gostei da idade dele agora é 16 anos embora ele pareça mais maduros que os adolescentes normais, por conta da sede de sangue que ele tem agora e os desafios que irá enfrentar vai combrar bastante de suas emoções tentar manter a cabeça fria
This novel was rather interesting. I was at first very put out by the MCs attitude throughout but came to understand a bit more as I read on in the novel. The parts that I disliked was the very descriptive torture scenes which made me wonder if this was the authors personal fetish, as it was overly intense.Anyways, I have read everything up to the current chapter I am at, I recall swearing not to purchase any more chapters but the author would release something that would cause me to purchase the chapter ahead in the want to know more, which is really a first for me in a long time.Overall it is a rather meticulously written novel, it captures many elements that a Novel should have and delivers these. As I mentioned above, the one retraction was the vivid torture scenes and I firmly believe that they could have been delivered in a more constructive manner…Just thinking now. I feel somehow the novels title should be different, as he is really more the villain than his wife to be is. After all he is armed with knowledge of the story and has actively taken away all the good things to be discovered by the protagonist and removed threats before they became serious threats with utter ruthlessness, so yeh maybe a different title.To sum up.. it ain’t bad !
it sounds interesting ? looks like a good start
This is a very good book and i enjoyed it so much. Thanks for the writing Mr.Author