TiagoMaia1922
Congratulations on being their personal cook cum maid Emon!
As they made their way off the field he made his way towards Azara as the giant wolf disappeared into a ball of electricity. "Are you going to be okay? If not I can bandage you up."
Jin's heart skipped a couple of beats as he tried to catch up to Jenna, unknowingly using one of the automatic inscribe seal incarnation on the cooking stove as he rushed to grab a basket for him.
The magic within Silk stopped circulating and while he could still hear no matter what he tried to say didn't come out his mouth. Suddenly he was truly scared, he was useless and in the other man's hands.
"You didn't want me to come? But it's the new year." Gan Tian Chi asks, seeming hurt by the fact that she did not want to come. He sees the two men who were rendered unconscious, and out of curiosity bends over to check on them.
Back in the physical world, Zack and Chai saw droplets of tears streaming down both Jennifer's and Melissa's cheeks.
"Nope," Nichiren replied with the shake of his head. "But I can stop him from dying."
Super repetitive plot. Same scenario has being recycled like 15+ times. Most of the time in the same context too. Also, there are quite a few plot holes. 90% of story is competitions in one thing or an other. So don't expect adventure. Most of each chapter is filler exposition that is common in web novels. I skimmed though chapters as they consist mostly of explanations irrelevant to story and just read dialogue and surrounding description. Kept hoping something new would happen, disappointed. Also, how Mc forces himself on women multiple times because no means yes right? Some cool cultivation and battles though.
Such a good story, unpredictable but such a slow update, i dont even know if its has been dropped,well i need 140 characters soooooooodotdotdot....
I like reading this kind of story. No superpower. No revenge. No tragedy. No palace intricts. But interesting female lead. I can calmly read each chapter and enjoy it's development.
hope you love the story. please comment so I can know your thoughts on my story. also if you would like any kind of plot please let me know, customers needs are first and foremost. if you love my story please try to vote and contribute. I'll also try to post new chapters as soon as possible.
I love this Aughor! He has such a beautiful way with words and his writing always makes me happy! Combination of love and comedy!!!
