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From the start to the recent chapters the story has flowed quite well with no jarring plots, its been written brilliantly, the world building has been done well as well but has to have a qualitative upgrade once more worlds are introduced, the human cultivation system while it might draw in readers because of the new beast system but is actually quite limiting, with barely the good soul world bearers having a chance at a high level and the rest having to accept mediocrity, body refining cultivation has now been introduced which is a good start already and with the mc being of a stronger race im guessing he'll also cultivate with that races system and bloodline which again would be a stronger system, when his bloodline awakens i hope the bloodline itself grants him a way to cultivate the way the celestia race does atleastFor a book which the author says will only have about 1000 chapters we're alraedy almost 30% through with only about a year gone and no actual personality change in the mc, but just teenage growth, if the mc doesnt change much this story will somehow end up with an mc with a teenagers personality, no special personalities like being a sadist, womanizer, cold, evil,lazy, chilled out,and the chaotic good ones etcWhat we have is a person who nice and at best hot blooded for battle which is too basic for an mc hes basically got aside characters personalityTHe side charactets dont pose much attachment and are disposable in the sense the mc will leave them behind, hopefully that changes when he reaches a stronger race and makes friendsCompleting this story in 700 chapters kinda feels jarring, i expect multiple time skips to achieve that which i dont want to see in quick succesion, hopefully the author decides to keep taking it at a slow pace and extend the novel to about 1500 chapters atleastTHe time flow needs a revamp, with the soul powers issue dealt with, and body refining being a long term thing, we dont need a day to day story, time can flow faster, if i ignore everything and just look at how at almost 300 chapters we've only had almost 1 year passing i must say its one of the world time passage sequences written, with there being no reason to have the mc start growing to the top in just a few years, and with him potentially having a long life span, the time definitely has to flow fasterIn essence except these minor issues to be dealt with the story itself is quite nice and has good potential the only thing to avoid i guess is an over fixation on the human race and making it reach the top, too many books have done that, and frankly books that dont focus on races to take up and focus on the mc and his companions and stuff as people more have a better plot
Author here! My review score accurately reflects my feeling on my story. If you like deep world building, strong character designs, clear character growth, and a completely flushed out plot you have come to the right story.The proof I can give you is the first two chapters are the ending point for volume 1. With a clear end point in place all that there is to do is fill in the blanks. I will also be frank. My grammar and spelling can be rough. I hope you will look past it and try to just enjoy the story.The book may start out slow but it will pick up in pace later on. There is a lot of background to build and a lot of moving pieces to generate and tie together.The story will continue forward to get to the tournament as I release chapters. However, there will also be plenty of flashbacks / cut scenes to flush out the story arcs dealing with James's parents, the lab, and the organization known as Black Death. I am a fan of video games and mysteries and I want to tie the two genres together in one place. Please be patient and enjoy my story. The chapter word count I am targeting is between 1,500 at the lowest to 3,500 at the highest. Ideally it will be closer to 2,000 words per chapter. The only reasons why a chapter's length would be around the 1,500 count is if I have to split a super long chapter in half or I get too busy on the weekend.I look forward to your input and comments!
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An interesting plague.inc concept with huge potential. Looking forward to more of this wonderful piece of art.Characters are likeable and interesting. Relatable too. The world-building is fabulous with many aspects being very realistic with a blend of fantasy.
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Protagonist is one of the most dumbest i have seen. He doesn't know even what is happening around him around him._____________________________________________
I've enjoyed the story so far. I haven't read far enough to give an accurate review but I do love the power system. James' manual is interesting and I'm excited to see how his power develops. I just have a couple questions about the school itself. Why are the class sizes so small? Is there a reason for that?
[Grammar] is near flawless 10/10=(I understand the language, and can read it perfectly. )[Stability] is good 10/10= (i can bear the wait without being driven MAD.)[Story Development] has me hooked 10/10= (Not too slow, not too fast.)[Character Design] is 10/10=( I CAN TELL WHAT PEOPLE LOOK LIKE! YASS!!!)[World Background] is 9/10= (It's good, and I like it very much BUT, I would like a little more info on what is going on in the world.)In other words; you get a big shiny gold star~
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