Nice one Great ❤️. Great job Monsieur ?
nice I've been wanting to read something about dragons. And pancakes is the best for this????????????????????????????????????????????????
WhenIfinished watching the untamed I can't help but want for more,so I read the novel......and it helped me understand more about wangxian's relationship.. their love story is unique andheartwarming
So, as an enthusiastic reader of this work, i wanna support the author by reviewing his work as he had requested for it from us. ?Although this work deserves a solid 5 star, I don't want to make the author very happy by giving him that. My reason is because of some flaws which I would explain below. Now, my rating goes thus:Writing quality: ? ? ? ?I gave 4 out of 5 stars because of there are few grammatical and spelling errors in the story. With some little edits, these would disappear. However, the errors and mistakes that one would find wouldn't shatter one's submersion into the story. Updating stability: ? ? ? ? ? I gave these 5/ 5 stars because author updates everyday. Also, he could give mass release of 4-5 chapters whenever he's in the mood. XD.Story Development: ? ? ? ?? This deserve a solid 5 star. Why? Because I love how the story is unfolding. It's entertaining and at the same time, unpredictable. Also, it is shrouded in mysteries, making it more enthralling. I am really enjoying the story progression and would defo continue to read until the end. Now, unlike some fantasy-cultivation books that have tons of cliches, making them boring and predictable, this book doesn't have cliches. No arrogant young masters and so on, if you get me. ?For the Cultivation aspect of the story: the Cultivation system that this story uses is truly unique. One could cultivate many realm-energies by comprehending them and harmonizing with them, becoming one with them. I like how the author made MC cultivates many energies that bestowed him with the power to manipulate and control fire and heat, ice and frost, wind and storm and many more. But what made me more exhilarated about the story were the energies never before seen in any cultivation book. So as examples, radiantforce energy which gave him the power to control light, strengthforce energy which gave him the power of Strength and Might, phantasmforce energy which gave him the power of Illusion. There are just so many to list. However, I would stop here. XD.And, another thing that excites me about this story is how the MC possesses tons of battle-physiques [all because of some good reasons which I wouldn't mention here]. These physiques allow him to battle cultivators that are higher in rank than him. However, he must slay his opponents or challengers in a minute, or he would become weakened by any of the physiques and get killed. Actually, he becomes weakened by them because the power of the physiques aren't supposed to be available to him yet. They are tremendous for him to handle and utilize. So, whenever he summons any of them, he experiences severe headaches, intense body pains and extreme fatigue. Therefore, he must eliminate his opponents before he blacks out due to the agonizing pain and splitting headache that he would suffer from using the powerful physiques. So all these that I stated was what made me love the story the more.Character design: ? ? ? ? I will give this 4/5 stars.My rating for this is because, in the beginning chapters of the story, MC was naive and kinda annoying. Also, he was a wimp. Anyways, this was because he actually hadn't stepped out of his uncle's mansion for long. So, he didn't really relate with other people other than his uncle, the maids and workers in the mansion who he had grown accustomed to. But stepping out of his uncle's mansion to hone himself in battle, he quickly became my favorite. The MC who is smart and intelligent quickly got used to how the Cultivation world works. So as the story progressed, I got to love MC the more because he did things that made me happy. I don't know about other readers and what they may think, but I would speak for myself. This MC is one of the best MCs that I have ever come across. I am currently at chapter 160 and I don't yet have a problem with the MC yet. How cool and amazing is that? Also, don't forget that this is an HAREM novel, but this MC doesn't think with his dick. However, he is an admirer of beauties, but who actually isn't???? So the MC's attributes include: smart, adorable, intelligent, generous, cool, then fierce and fearsome in the way that he fights, ruthless as he has killed a lot of cultivators that tried to harm him, daring and super fucking adventurous as he had struggled against high-rank cultivators for cultivation resources, artifacts and treasures. Can you imagine that? So crazy. Haha.World background: ? ? ? ? ? This surely deserves a solid 5 star. Author really took his time to describe the world well, and everything in it. Note: when you start reading, you may find author explaining stuffs. But these stuffs aren't random useless stuffs, they are actually useful elements in his story. I guess that's just his way of writing which I feel is Descriptive/ expository writing. However, this won't break your immersion. I promise. ? Summary: Story is very enjoyable and exhilarating as there are lot of plot twists and stuffs that would excite and delight you. So, I would suggest that you check it out. You would definitely not be disappointed. And if you are, well... then you are looking for something else that isn't in this story. ?Author-San, thanks so much for this work. ? Do keep updating. ?✌️
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Dear Author-sama,Yo, I got some comment for you to read here.You should have just made it a xianxia with MC that got some kind of power related to 'programming reality' instead of making a Minecraft Fan-Fic... I mean, what is the use of Command Block if it is not used like in Minecraft? When I first saw this story, I was expecting you to make our MC a law-defying entity, which can defy the law of physics like making a block of dirt float or something similar.It would have been really cool if you can make it like that and make our MC use the 'physics defy' using the Command Block. Oh yeah, Minecraft is all about gathering resource to increase the player's capabilities such as strength and defense so it is highly recommended to make some customization there.I won't say your work is good, but I won't say it is bad either. Pretty much not bad, hehe.But well, what do you think?By the way, DON'T DIE ON ME!!!-Sincerely A Certain Homo SapiensP.s. exp
I love the fact that it's a sports novel and I like the development and where the story is going. please keep on updating
Simply a nice to read novel where a transmigrator hides this fact as a summoned humanoid monster with equal contract of a reincarnator.Gives the story an interesting base with a fun jokes and discussions about the MC’s lazyness.
Nice story, another amazing story from the destiny author. Keep up the nice work.................................................................,......................
Brother your dialogues need massive work. Most of the time the conversation doesn't has any emotions. Also you need a editor asap. This thing is barely readable
a trash story out of a trash human?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️?️
5 star ,cause this novel make me laugh so hard,, keep it up author ,,nice work ?????????????????????????????????