I can't move and I can hardly breathe.
Giving someone's background, or explaining some part of the story or logic are not good things to write as big paragraphs. For these, an easy fix is to start a new paragraph every 3-4 sentences. It may seem trivial, but it makes a significant difference while reading.
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Morgan Freeman seeing the expression of Benette looking relieve yet concerned about something immediately guess what it is.
Ojo said, "Sometimes you annoyed me with this your I don't want trouble attitude, look I am going to force you to talk to this girl because she is a goldmine"
Mite: 50/50
'How can you say that, who would watch over this three?!'
"My name is Roland Andrade." He said that day. "I am a close family of your mother, will you let me take you in? As a family."
''Meu lorde, eu quero pedir sua permissão para uma exploração no norte do seu território encontramos a 3 anos atrás um mapa em uma parte do tesouro do (barba negra) e lá continha uma profecia e um mapa indicando a localização de suas (terras) senhor ao norte.
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'Ah!! I want to join them!' Touru thought as he kept looking at the group until they disappeared in the dungeon.