The narration of the book is good but it could do a bit of improvement by being a bit interactive with the narration. Well, that's something I have trouble doing myself. Perhaps, breaking the paragraphs that got too long might help for the readers that were reading on the phone. The storyline is very unique and something I have never encountered before but the foundation or introduction of the system at the start of the story feels a little bit not enough. I only read until the first few chapters so it will probably be expanded more in the later chapters. Overall it's a nice read with some new and nice ideas.
The book started good and everything but then it just turned into trash idk if they switched writers or something but it got really stupid couldn’t read it no more I wouldn’t recommend anyone to read this ??
where are the tags some of us don't read harem
the story is good it hooked me up but the updates is so slow sad...........................................................................
Great story, I have only read 35 chapters so far. MC is evil, writing quality is excellent with good humour. I just hope there will be some adult scenes in the future chapters.
I would never say no to genshin impact story and I give this story a good rating hoping that the author will update more frequently so that more people will be read this story. Good work author
Lorem Ipsum errr, I don't remember the rest so let's move on.The story paints a vivid picture of the world where the action takes place. Through the usage of the tiny elements of the world, the author instantly immerses the reader into the rich in flavour world of his creation.I really hate speaking about the plot as I believe everyone should try it themselves. Despite that, solidly written cliches and relatively standard openings allows me to peer into what possibly this novel have in store.Execution of the further plot is what I'm actually curious about, as I have a feeling that it will exceed my expectations on this one.In the end, I cannot really say much about the story. It's a solid piece of the literature that promises a tasty piece of webnovel down the line.Now it's up to author to live up to the promises his chapters give.
This is the first time I'm going to write a review.Overall the novel is good.The MC is not too stupid, he sometimes think ahead and do something unexpected. His personality is not also not that bad. From being too cautious from his mother into Momma's boy, it's kind of funny actually. After being transported (not sure) in Lucius body, he started missing his mother.Well, one thing I noticed is that the world background is sometimes confusing. Though, I still hope that the Author will keep his words by actually turning this novel more exciting after 150 chapters
I welcome all opinions of my readers, you are free to point out the irregularities existing in my novel with a civilized approach.I trust the story's successful building would depend on your views about it.Enjoy your time reading everyone.
This is my first time to rate your work dear and what can i say?...This is so good!!!i like the way thai it is not dragging but direct to the point..the plot somehow similar with other novels but still it has its owm unique plot..i hope you update regularly..
BTW, not bout the book but bout what’s happening right now on COVID-19...actually the SARS COV 2 (COVID-19) will only stay on the surface for bout 8-9 hours.the most important thing to do is improve our hygeine and apply social distancy for the meantime..
I'm finding this book really hard to get into as the premise of it all is so sht. The whole reason for everything is basically he didn't complete his father's dream so he felt guilty af, resulting in a slump, his mother was disappointed in the mc for not following his father's dream resulting in them distancing themselves. He goes back and decides to complete his father's dream instead and goes from there. It is repeatedly mentioned how bad it was because he didn't follow his father's dream. To me, this is so sht and just rly hard to get into. As the mc did nothing wrong, he just made rly bad business decisions and surrounding himself with the wrong ppl. He followed his dream and now this is made out that it was the wrong thing to do and that he should have just followed his father's dream instead. You shouldn't force your child to do what you want... let him have his own dreams. Now, this whole story is about him completing his father's dream and correcting his mistake of following his own dream instead. This is just such a bad way to build the foundation of your story on and is rly hard for me to immerse myself as I dunno, it's just bad thinking.
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