Dieu vous bénisse, mon enfant.
Thanks for reading, the story is now completed ............
Very dark good storyline
I must commend the initial segment of the narrative, which was indeed captivating, earning it a solid 4-5 star rating. However, regrettably, the quality takes a downturn as the story progresses. By chapter 179, my assessment has dipped to a 4 out of 5.
If you wish to maintain a positive reading experience without being overwhelmed by generic harem clichés, I recommend stopping after Hajime and his companions return to their alternate world. For those who still crave closure on their journey, chapters 180 to 196 provide a satisfying conclusion, wrapping up loose ends and marking the end of chapters that hold any semblance of intrigue, in my opinion.
Beyond that point, I believe the series loses its appeal, and I personally found the plot stale and unengaging. Hence, my overall rating for "Arifureta" stands at 2 out of 5. I stopped reading due to the lack of freshness in the storyline.
I would rate this 3.5 to 4 stars, but since I appreciate the translation and the main character isn't overpowered, I gave it a full 5 stars. What I admire about this novel is its realistic portrayal of the MC, who starts off relatably struggling. Unlike other modern reincarnated heroines, she isn't invincible, facing challenges from her "alleged best friend" and cruel family members. While some may argue she lacks growth, she evolves and improves, taking charge after acquiring shops and support, even assisting her family.
The romance isn't the primary focus until the end, which I find refreshing. It's enjoyable to see her journey from being isolated to forming alliances, with characters gradually warming up to her. However, the main character's tsundere moments can be cringe-worthy at times.
In terms of the male lead, he isn't portrayed as a typical black-hearted character. Initially, he comes across as naive in matters of romance, but it adds a touch of cuteness. Though his character can feel clichéd, his background feels believable, including his ruse about his illness. The part where he allows his half-brother to seduce a girl instead is a sour note, but it eventually resolves positively. There are some plot holes, like the unexplained theft in the MC's carriage, and the story doesn't delve deeply into palace politics or warfare.
The villains, particularly the original female lead, are frustrating due to their nastiness, promiscuity, and arrogance. Some supporting characters are underdeveloped, but a few do show growth. The older villains, such as the MC's grandmother and mother-in-law, serve as a driving force for the MC's growth, even if they're one-dimensional.
Overall, this story suits my preference for non-overpowered protagonists. Other similar novels I enjoy are "The Job of An Imperial Concubine" and "Counterattack of the Cannon Fodder Chambermaid," which offer slower-paced historical tales with relatable characters overcoming societal constraints.
I strongly disagree with those who claim the protagonist's personality is uninteresting. Instead, it's akin to a blank canvas, as each avatar or alter ego represents an evolution, amplification, or variation of his core self. It's not that the protagonist lacks personality; rather, he expresses it through diverse personas. These alter egos should be seen as extensions of himself, not distinct characters. The essence of this story lies in observing how these personalities develop and interact, making each chapter feel like exploring different narratives within a single character. Reading this novel is akin to experiencing multiple protagonists, all originating from a shared central figure. One cannot reduce the main character to just a single identity.
This is surprisingly grounded and coherent compared to a lot of things that have similar premises. This is one of the better stories on this site and definitely worth the time to read.
In thia romance there is literally the copy of Accelerator if we consider only his apparence-
Chapter 337...
I've forced myself this far, but I can't go on anymore.
He's so weak, the story is slow. I'm done.
Better? Are you sure? I read My Vampire System up to ch 600 something, and I given up, because its not any better. Yes, its somehow decent up to ch 300 or so, but after that its goes downhill, and after ch 600 its a pure... garbage.
Read it first and then form your own opinion about it. Deciding whether or not to read it based on someone else’s opinion will ultimately prevent you from reading a lot of good works because of their opinion. I’ve stopped reading books because of this, so I really recommend reading the first 50 chapters. If you like the work, then keep going.
i love oppai??