Too many things to complain about in this "novel". Heres my review :) .................nothing............. devoid of good content..... like your novel........................................
Yeah, so this book, is a test, please be honest but not brutal, this is not an Eminem song, i think it's good for a novel, so please tell me what you think of it.
Ok it might not be good for your phone but don't rate the story bad just cuz of that just move on to another story instead of just hating. I like how he actually is trying to be original and doing this different type of book. It works perfectly fine for me to translate online to text so keep up the good work author and don't let the haters get you down
Each chapter is less than 500 characters. Read a couple of chapters and nothing remotely interesting is happening.No world building, no character dept. The only thing that we know is his age and dream.Most of the chapters are like reading a movie script.My advice. Pour more effort in each chapter, make it longer, more meaningful.Your grammar is okey to read. Instead of making a list of things to do, make it him saying what he needs to do, why and a backup plan if that doesn't work out(Don't you make it like that in your head in your daily life ?)I will come back later, hope you fix the problems :)
If you just came from a heavy and upsetting novel this is a great one to pick up your mood.I love the story and characters. The novel is light and refreshing without very much drama or things that could make you sad.I hope that this novel will get picked back up again because I really enjoyed the chapters which have been made so far.
U did a wonderful job here this is a must read There was no dull moment at all this piece is a blast???U did a very nice job here thumbs up ????
It's early, but it has a solid start, a slightly fast pace, the writing is good and the idea is great, as it's a football work it has my full support and reading time, I hope for more chapters.
Look for the other post i already made. I have two accounts so yea. thought id do a review on my other just to get that drippy 5 star. Im planning on writing more and i am currently, its just slow since im still thinking of minor plot points and how i want characters to act n stuff. expect a cool MC in a bit.
It was a compelling and fun read. The many instances/ situations the main character finds himself in make you feel for the guy. I couldnt help but be drawn in.
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Reviewed at chapter 11,Excellent work so far, I always wanted to read a novel of a transmigrated scientist in a cultivation world, and a mathematician is very good too. I am keeping some golden tickets for when it is enabled. The MC has a consistent personality and doesn't stray from his initial goal, 5 stars for character design. We don't know much about the world but I quite like the fact that those in power do their best to sort of brainwash/endoctrinate their people. It seems very realistic and not something we see often put forward in cultivation novel even though it is sort of mandatory for sects to do so. 5 stars world The writing quality is the best you can find on webnovel, I have seen some typo but it very rare (I remember seeing once heeled instead of healed) 5 stars writing quality. Please keep writing, your knowledge of science seems adequate to write this novel, I like that you took time to give some research material to validate your claim in the novel. I won't hesitate to support you when they enable it. Keep up the good work!