Hi so summary is inaccurate, first chapter gains the system AFTER entering the academy. This kinda changes the MC from someone who wants to make the most out of life to oh wow ima do military stuff because I want to be hokage. Also apparently reborn in a parallel world? Hardly see how this affects the character at all. So tldr clickbait summary: but it’s at least written okay so this story could develop into soemthing
a good enough story, such a pity it wasn't chosena good enough story, such a pity it wasn't chosena good enough story, such a pity it wasn't chosen
Give credit where credit is due. I came with low expectations and was blown away by this work. Now my expectations have been raised so high that I'm not sure the author can keep meeting them. Then again, if he is who I think he is, that shouldn't be a problem.
If this novel doesn't get selected, I am fu****g gonna learn chinese just to read this in raw. Thats all i have to say for this one.Peace out.
overall the story is good. the funny plot not so forced and not lame at all. the interesting part is about the cultivation itself. but the story need more details about the world and surrounding environtment so the imagination of the reader can be perfect when reading it. overal it's good novel and worth to spend your coins on it. i hope i can read next chapter....
Author again here I would like to apologise for some mistakes in Chapter 9 it's corrected now please read it again.???????and please tell me if there is any other mistake in upcoming chapters I will try my best and correct the mistake with in 3 hours and try not to do it again.happy reading.....and sorry again.
this novel is so good and i love the premise does anyone know any novel similar to this? where the mc has a very strong background and treated like a young master
i am already hooked with the initial chapters, they make me want to continue with the story! by far, the story is amazing and the author's writing style gives u a vivid description of the novel's world. hoping for more updates, good luck author!
I believe some more work can be done on character description. There are indeed some Grammer errors. Development of the plot and chapter to can get better. I have faith you have the potential to upgrade on this point ?
This could be improved especially on the grammar, world building and character end but I'm willing to give the author 5 stars to support his/her work.
For an average novel, I give an average rating. This book is your typical cliché overpowered cheat novel. MC has the power to attract overpowered pets and shock everyone. Dumb arrogant character appears in less than 10 chapters, he attempts to 'kill' the main character because main character insulted him. Hence main character attempts to kill him as revenge but ignorant police attacks main character because he has the power to control beast, "He must be a traitor to humans". Then proceeds to attack and get demolished by main character, "Impossible, how could a human achieve this level of power". Stronger guy shows up and resolves misunderstanding, "That cannon fodder attacked our beloved MC first! Ignorant police, you're fired from your job! You are a god-level talent, you need to join our (insert prestigious academy). I will give you money for you to join it". First up, we have no idea how this system work at all, no numbers or anything. Upgrades are thrown here and there and I doubt they are even keeping track of the number of points MC has. To nerf the main character so that the story can be extended, naturally we have to suppress the main character's cheat and instead opt for a god-level potential pet. Naturally since this is a cliché overpowered cheat novel, we need to have absolutely no world building. We'll just throw out the details as the plot progresses. Naturally, I came here having no expectations of this novel. To me, this novel is just some junk food to eat while looking for actually good novels to read. So in summary, your typical cliché novel that can be found everywhere on this website. Good luck finding an actual good read.
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