There's a harem tag yet the MC can't keep any of his girlfriends. And I happen to like all of them too. Elisha Cuthbert, Anne Hathaway and Blake Lively. I wonder who's the next celeb he won't be able to keep.Still, kudos to the author for writing or rather translating this. It's just the story is frustrating to read. Even 'I'm in Hollywood' is better in the romance department.
liked the concept but it's not just for me?
Haven't started yet but I sure will ; I just hope it'll be as intriguing as it sounds. This is the first Horror Story I actually find myself liking...
One of the best villain book you can find it so good that you will love it. It has everything one want to find in the villain, not like the ones who are one sided villain just treat everyone as trash no love no respect for anyone. This book has revenge, growth, romance , fights, best characters development and interactions. Will say that anyone who is new just give it a try and you will love this. And one of the best part is that the MC's character is very good not some brain dead person mature in handling the situation, not like some trash mcs who already in their 30s and still act like teenagers
The book is so interesting...The plot is amazing, the style of writing is kinda interesting too.Not to mention the very attractive title.I love everything about this book so far ?
Awesome read! There's only three chapters so far but the world and the characters are beautifully painted (or war-painted). I'm a sucker for wars on paper, both steel-armed and political. And I can't wait to get to the latter. Also excited on what will become of Cornelius and Commodus. Only reason I didn't give full marks was the shifting tenses. But that can be easily remedied. I'd suggest to pick one and stick to it throughout. It's minor though and only slightly took me away from the fantasy. I hope this comment doesn't come off as harsh criticism but as fellow advice from a fellow author to another.Advice aside, this story was a breath of fresh air. I'd done some review swaps but I like your story the most so far. I'll put your story in my collection, not for the sake of it but because I'm already invested in where the author will take me. Kudos to you and keep up the great work!**: Haven't played Total War yet but because of your story, I might just give it a go :)
Thanks for the update and for the record I have to go to the office and I will be there at baka bawal HAAHHAHA to get the plates and napkins and I will be there at baka bawal HAAHHAHA
I really liked the story, but it's impossible to read with all these grammar errors and poor editing. I feel it would be an easier fix than just having a bad story. I hope the author looks into getting either a better editor or get a programm checking the grammar
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This novel one is using the images from another work as its cover that work is known as VIRTUAL WORLD CLOSE COMBAT MAGE . This work is hosted by quidans partners Gravity Tales and will move to Quidans page and be exclusive here at the end of the current arc. Two the synopsis and work is a copy of the story CLOSE COMBAT MAGE which is the story pertrayed here. The original author of which is CLOUD SKY ( YUN TIAN KONG). If web novel doesn't wish to be involved in a potential costly lawsuit the should take this work down.
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Awesome novel. Very interesting read. There's something different about this novel. Don't know what it is, but it made me read it in one go. MC isn't acting like a naive dumb hero wanting to save everyone. Survival is his first utmost priority. Wouldn't just make friends willy nilly, specially if it's obvious that they aren't very sincere. Right now there's not much to go on, but I really feel like this is going to be an interesting novel. Hopefully.