Hello, author here if you have any suggestion as well as errors that need to be corrected feel free to leave a review or comment under the chapters ! Enjoy your read !
Downloaded the app just to read my friends novel and it's really good
For now, I do like it. My friend is a good writer :)) It’s a taekook story. Who will not like them? ?
Lacks world building, time references dialouge is ok at best. Grammar is OK, it is readable, that is all I can give it in terms of compliments.
Ok, it is as inspiring as it is thrilling. His journey to become an immortal god and tamer will tug at your heartstrings and spark your own dreams of greatness. An interesting and sometimes funny story.
Engaging but has some rough patches, Story Development: strong premise with intriguing twists. Compelling protagonist and side characters. Interesting but could use more depth.
Keep going on. Lovely novel with a very good FL character and equal ML character. Thank you Author that you make us enjoying so much your novel. ???????
The premise alone is legendary. Men will speak of this book from near and far.They might not read past chapter 5, but it will be remembered!Read through chapter 11. At 8 or so it gets interesting. …Not the Hendersons! Lol
Amazing writing skills, Good character development ???
I have only read so far, so I can't say much about update stability or world background, but my main concern is just how stupid the MC is and without any kind of common sense, it's actually quite frustrating to read, considering the MC has such a high intelligence stat you would think he had atleast a slightly higher intelligence then stupid people, but as of right now I can say the stats are definitely a lie.
OMG! This story is sooo great! I must really commend the Author's talent. Good writing style and Good character presentation.Definitely a great read!
nice and interesting one I'll be reviewing it