Ximnax
This story has a unique plot and I'm rooting for it. The protagonist is also relatable and I love the writer's sense of description. Keep writing and keep up the good work. You have the potential of becoming a great author.
not worth reading. Beginning was all right, but it went from to worse.
I really like this story so far! Honestly, I wasn't a big fan of system books, but I find this book rather intriguing. Keep up the good work author~
The book feels very fast paced however this also feels kind of correct because it feels like how a person would remember things if it happened to them like they remember the really important things and that's what matters because it's what's interesting And that's good.
This is an amazing novel. I'll support the author and recommend the readers to read this work.Keep writing and updating with this same spirit. ALL THE BEST
I like how the novel was written. I've been reading a lot of novels about MC/s taking revenge, but this is one is different (in my opinion). The MC is a care-free person, he does not care if he is being mocked by the students and teachers. Because he can prove himself. I know the book may not be a cup of tea for those who have been reading novels that are highly rated. But for me, this one just makes you laugh. There is nothing serious about it. It's a type of novel where you can read after reading lots of similar books which are sometimes too heavy or too cliché. I'm an idiot. I like reading easy to read novels. I like this novel. If you don't like it, then fine. Everyone has different opinions. But I will surely recommend this to those who are tired from reading cliché novels or others. It's light, not stressful to read. Don't have to think about complicated stuffs when reading this. As I said earlier, this is just my opinion. The choice is yours if you want to read or not.
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intriguing plot, interesting characters. The writing style is good, flaws and typos here and there but nobody's perfect. I love how the story is going so far, and I'm looking forward to the next chapters! author is very generous and spoiling us with publishing so many chapters in a day❤keep up the good work
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The grammar and missing words are killing my brain cells. Whilst the story does have potential, it is squashed by the inconsistent MC(the humanoid monster-killing dilemma+just bad decisions) and the bad worldbuilding. The whole thing feels like a bad superhero movie. The action does pull me in but that is where it stops. There is no ˇ"meat" to this novel, there is no motivation, the bear surrenders just couse the author wanted to. In conclusion, if the author fixes his grammar this could get a 3 star rating and as for the story I just don't know.
A very nice gamer book. Almost found myself in it while sleeping I thought I was one of them contractors.. Though some typo errors could be encounter, its the story itself that brought spices.. Its nothing more than an rpg,felt like the author is a maniac or just addicted to guns.. Just the overkilling and bruttality that makes me cringe sometimes.. Overall, good job!!
