"ah see you your there!"
More world building.Longer chapters.You will improve the longer you keep writing
What a First chapter amazing and sadly one too keep it up ????
it's all about broken heart and how to consider it as a soothing romantic felt ...
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hi I would just like to know if you have dropped this novel?
exciting And interesting story,,keep up the good work author
I don't know if it gets better, but so far, the story has little to no explanation. Things just happen with no back story. Seems really rushed.
This is a system/game novel. And as the author told me, it isn't as horrifying as the cover so far.On the other hand, no idea what happened to the other x million humans overnight, assuming they aren't the monsters he's begun killing off. Basic structure is pretty good, grammar, spelling, and so on. Capitalization kind of comes and goes, but it doesn't interfer with the understanding. There's obviously much more to be explained about the world/dream/game than the first five chapters held.
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alguien puede hablar con algun traductor o editor de qidian que nos pueda hacer el favor de preguntar a la gerencia de qidian si planean seguir traduciendo esta gran novela? o preguntar a alguno de sus amigos traductores si quieren continuar con esta novela?
I realy enjoy when the MC is not limited to the typical generic morals. The MC is not a "good guy" neither are most of his rivals it is like a breath of fresh air when you are constantly trying to find a book with an evil protaganist and you find one but when you find one that is well writen it is awesome. The author updates regularly.