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I just randomly found this book, oh my, it's interesting, I keep going reading. Yo, author, do some magic and bring some more chapters, please, and yes, world background, character design, plus thrill, and so on. I am just a common reader and yes, the writing quality is also fine, come see itself, check it out.
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very good novel looking forword for the next chapters see you not for mind mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
The story is not too bad, it is basically a first work of attempt by an author, with many *** scenes and many cliches.My biggest problem is that the MC ended up raping a character, he hears aphrodisiac drugs involved, even though it wasn't the MC himself that made the woman look like this, I couldn't keep reading.I have seen cases where women at parties were drugged or were heavily drunk and were raped.Esim, this is rape, you have *** with someone who is not aware or under strong drug effects, it is rape, and even though the author tried to justify things, the character of the MC at that point for me, was worth less than rubbish.
As the one how wrote this Web novel I admit that it has flaws but I don't think it matters the story is entertaining and that's what matters the most. I don't think any one is here to read about some deep filosofical ideas and principles.English isn't my first language so please excuse the horrible speling. Give it a try and you'll see if it's something for you or not.
Good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! very good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Super good¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hey webnovel when are you translating the new novel from the author of the legendary mechanic. Hey webnovel when are you translating the new novel from the author of the legendary mechanic.
I was able to read it to a point. Although I'm not a fan of transmigration stories and all. I mist say it is well written. And organised. To those fan of such stories, you could give it a try.
This story is pretty good. keep up the good work, can’t wait for the next chapter!!?
I like reading novels with a system involved that’s why I started reading this one. First of the characters. The MC is bland and we know next to nothing about him apart from his illness. There are also no side characters, more like extras in a movie that are rarely mentioned then easily forgotten. The speed in which his skills improve is way too fast. Maxing our his skills in a matter of days is just too much. There’s barely any effort involved except spending some time grinding his skills. I can understand the first few levels being leveled fast but mastering a skill should take along time. I don’t understand how cooking a few types of dishes will somehow max out his cooking skill since there are thousands of different recipes out there-the same goes for his other skills. Also the rewards for maxing our a skill is ridiculously high. It seems like everything is being handed to him on a silver platter and basically spoon feeding him with a spoon made of platinum. If the author slows down abit and start fleshing out his characters out and do some worldbuiling then this could turn out to be pretty decent. At the moment there’s a lack of a goal except for getting stronger.
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