Well good enough I thought mc is smart and all but he is just too suspicious of everything. He doesn't trust system and loses his chance of becoming strong, cares so much for Nicole's Parents but show little to no affection towards his own.And loner My a*s he is travelling with a group (Nicole's Family) which seems like a burden to me. Sorry Dude I'm dropping this. Although author has great himar (Author's note at end of chapter is always funny) but it's not my cup of tea.Thank You!!
Yet another trash story without any thought put into it. It has more plot holes than a sieve. Characters have less dimensions than computer programs.For translation what better description than 'Qidian Translation Quality' so worse than MTL.
DO NOT READ!!! IT SAYS COMPLETED BUT IT HAS ACTUALLY BEEN DROPPED!!!I REPEAT DO NOT READ! IT IS NOT ACTUALLY COMPLETED!!!
I don't even know where to start I mean I guess it's your standard paid novel it's fairly good quality but has the semi standard issue of plot holes I mean it's supposed to be a regression vrmmorpg yet after he hit level 10 suddenly no leveling not skills no farming ect ect he just suddenly starts pulling stuff out of no where because of his future knowledge yet all the resources needed to create these things arent mentioned he doesnt go searching for them it's just suddenly I already have all the items to create this or this barren valley with nothing in it take some soldier go for a walk find the hidden forest of night that has the ultra sss diamond grade rainbow mystic moonstone that's even super rare late game I'm exaggerating but that's how it comes off also he supposedly logged in 2 months before even the beta testers can log in yet only a week or so seems to pass before its beta log in day overall author seemed to spew chapters out as fast as possible and didn't make sure he wasnt contradicting himself or forgetting things and it shows
the story is very good.I just want the novel to progress a little faster.
Synopsis are from other novel, instead of a novel with a good premise we recive the old harem story with all the world existing only to satisfy the pevert wishes from the author.
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Not this kind of synopsis again... EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP DXP DXP SXKE EXP EXP
I don't know why I bother attempting to read these kind of stories but whatever. Here is another MC saves girls and then girls for some reason falls for him and he starts gathering girls like its pokemon, i mean gotta catch em all am i right?I personally don't see why authors always have to make harems because you dont need to add a girl to his collection to write a good story and you can satisfy all your lonely fantasies with 1 girl. The story is only slightly different then most other stories of this genre with that system so if your looking for another of the 1 million of these kind of novels where the MC gets a system, picks up girls that has no personality and mind of their own, and ends up a god at the end or something of the sort then this is for you!Long story short there is nothing that really unique about this and its just another story to add to the many in the list of Harem/Systems.
Well it's somewhat like 'Everybody Else Is A Returnee'......................................................................................
OK, so, because of Christmas, I have kinda lost motivation to continue writing the book, so yeah, that happened. I will continue to write, but I have an idea for another book, so stay tuned.
The Book imProved a lot Over the time ive reD it and even got more WxcitIng with the new chappterS coming out recently. I love chapter 40 The most.