AcramLumumba
I just don't understand men like Liam, telling the woman, he loves her but then he went & be intimate w/ other girls? worse, even getting them pregnant. What I wanna see for progress is to see his suffer & suffer for his actions and not the woman being weak & get back w/ him again that easily.
Story is good to a certain extent , but it’s stupid …
when i finished this novel,I wanted to reread it. That's how much i enjoyed this book and I'll be waiting for a sequel
Story flow is good but need to improve grammar.
How often update??
I'm in love with this story! The read was definitely worth it
213 chapters 5-9-23
I'm not crying, you're crying. The scene where Lin Xiazhi carries her mother in her arms and tells Qingbei to watch over Shen Ying while she goes out for a while—this kid is seven years old and already carrying the weight of the world, and his sister is out there murdering people to keep them safe. The bond between these siblings is everything. And Shen Ying! When she wakes up and sees her daughter, her eyes instantly redden. She can't even speak, just shakes her head to say she's okay. That silent communication between mother and daughter... it hits different when you know everything they've been through. But the part that really wrecked me was the ending. Lin Xiazhi puts a handkerchief over Shen Ying's nose, tells her to sleep, and then sets her bones while she's unconscious. The trust here is terrifying and beautiful at the same time. Shen Ying could have woken up and seen her daughter performing surgery, but she doesn't. She just... lets go. She trusts her daughter completely. Meanwhile, Lin Qingbei is outside eating five bowls of chicken soup like nothing happened. This kid has some serious emotional regulation going on, and honestly? I respect it. The emotional core of this story isn't about revenge—it's about family. Lin Xiazhi isn't killing for fun, she's killing so her mother and brother can survive. That's the thread that holds everything together.
There's actually a manhwa of this and i tell you, its actually not half bad
Jesus this had potential if you can't even write a singular amazing character much less female, yea harem prob ain't the way
Unfortunately some people just like sh*t shoved down their throat and will gobble it up happily
I can no longer continue reading this; the main character is a clear hypocrite. She厌恶上一世界的男配,但对现实中的男主却毫不反感。为什么?他和那些人一样糟糕!简直是救世主与邪恶大资本家的对立。
章节里夸张地描述了63次主角称呼老傅和年轻冯为肮脏的、邪恶的资本家,而她自己却像奴隶一样为男主卖力工作,这简直令人难以置信。她在穿越局工作多年,是顶尖员工,却只得到……零薪水。她有什么资格骂那些人是渣滓,明明自己是男主的‘奴隶’?她在最后一个世界,可能已经转世过十次、三十次,甚至七十万次,却从未得到一分钱报酬。而且,她还痴迷于男主的外貌,总是赞美他的手臂线条、英俊的面庞。他们仅有一面之缘,他就变得占有欲强,总想阻止她工作。
别忘了还有韭菜情节!所有人都被批评为韭菜,唯独男主例外,因为他是主角的‘特例’。想象一下,三万亿年里,最好的员工不拿一分报酬,她却自愿在辛苦挣来的别墅里免费抚养你长大。
Sadly this was a drop. I won’t be rereading or reading when new chaps come out
