This is a great story. It needs some editing, but it’s worth reading. Had me crying at times.
I love so much this story.the way these 2 people connect
it's a well writen story, i love it. if you have any socmed to keep up with your readers, please let me know. thanks in advance
it is a good read
Patiently waiting for the next chapters
The story is fine and all, but the writing quality is not the best.
In almost every chapter you have dialogs like this:
-"How about all of you first announce your name?" Melody said telling them to reveal their names to her.
"Alright. "
Vincent, John, Iris, Varth, Leilani, and Nevis revealed their names to the fairy, taking several seconds to do so. -
You often have a lengthy exposition to a topic, then somebody mentions it in almost the same words and then you get a reply often in the same style. So you read the same words 3 times in a row. The example above is just one without spoilers, but once you notice this pattern, it gets exhausting to read.
Also, dialogues are far too "detailed". Where a normal, short answer would be the norm and perfectly fine, here you have long answers with all the details so the conversations dont "feel" like conversations normal people would have.
hmm, you seem familiar, have we met before? ?
I know there's no romance tag but would somebody tell me is mc's erectile dysfunction cured later?
Fellow daoist, this is me reading again i reached i don't know 400ish chapters but the dao of cringe created a mental demon which destroyed my foundation, i don't know if my dao heart has been refined enough to resist.But here i go, good luck to me i guess.I hope all the mtl training didn't go to waste
The summary is not accurate. That is not how she gets the “dad”
The chapter seems to live like it’s title hahaha still waiting tho~
Good story....only problem with the mc....he still acts like a beast.....Hope he will change in the future..Need more chapters to further comment....(:(:(:.......................................................