it's like overlord turned up to 11 and if ainz ooal gown was a nymphomaniac girl.
author writing the main character personality like a loyal dog working hard his ass off for an academy and his so called "classmates" for whom he didn't owe anything like a pushover and if he fail to save anyone from death or anything then keep blaming himself like it's his fucking responsibility, any character can force mc in do things for their amusement like zeva fighting him or headmaster. fucking loser
When someone with the strength to crush your skull with their bare hands and is a walking one man army that gets reincarnated what could go wrong I love this story and am aways up to date, I came here from Reddit.
hey there! can you change the ending of the novel a bit so that the bad ending could be changed into a good one.it's a request i hope if our translator can do anything about that?
The whole idea of Ongatuny hiding her true identity while dealing with betrayal and destiny is really gripping. I love the mix of mythology, war, and strong female warriors,it makes the story feel epic. The part about the Anunnaki and advanced technology adds such a unique twist, too. Definitely seems like a story filled with action, emotion, and powerful themes. I’d love to see how Ongatuny’s journey, continues ,i greatly recommend this novel
The author's creativity and imaginative skills are at par. The writer thoughts are well projected and the plot itself is intriguing. The language too was easy and there wasn't much hassle in understanding. The background and character design was vivid. I feel the chapters are a bit shorter and the cover can be a little interesting.Overall, it's an interesting novel to read.
Love the way you wrote. The beginning of the story wasn't rushed nor was it slow. This story is should become popular. Also, I would suggest you to add some more tags to your novel such as mystery.
One of the best Naruto fanfic!!!!!!??????
You're doing great, authoress salvy . Your book makes my day and i just can't get enough
Good story . steady progress and good cheats.
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