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Okay this novel first felt great but...everything goes too fast.. he gains too much too fast.. as if 1 system isn't enough.. he has 3 at this point. and then he has like too many supreme inheritances and other things.. there could easily be 3000 chapters to this novel if all these things were given at a slower pace and becoming stronger would've been at a reasonable pace... also he has too many skills and talents
MC's personality sucks, always short on time, always getting dragged around, lazy, and there's school arch coming straight up, it'll be unbearable
Not worth readingThe mc is actually useless. He progressed so fast in the first couple of days, reaching the peak of Qi refining in the first day then peak of Foundation Establishment in a few months but from my understanding they are all from the system. He spent 3 years without any progress. He's been trying to condense a golden core for 3 years since he was at the peak of Foundation Establishment but still couldn't break through, he eventually did but guess what it was from a pill he got from signing in...At least in other sign in novels the mc's could break through without the need for their system
Earlier in the novel the character was only around the boy and story was unclear how ever if a person reads from the very 1st chapter to 39th I guess , huge development in both the writer grammar , delivery, story and the novel , if it goes as it is now , pls help it , if helped it can be a great great great manga
I never liked Sci-fi books, don't know why........but I found this and the name compelled me to it...I have read the first few chaps and I must say that I'm quite impressed.
just another 'beast master' story with the exact same plot as the rest of them..............................................................
The premise and concept of the book itself are interesting. This might just be my personal preference but I like the idea of the game.And I am excited to see what would happen next to Manu. The author has written it in 1st POV so I expect more details of the ML's thoughts and feelings. also, WE NEED MORE CHAPTERS!!!
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So after reading 40+ chapters. (Idk how I came this far but I am going to discontinue now, still here's a review of what I found)First of all this is your typical trash chinese novel ok but readable... Grammar and quality is alright, could even say better than average but again full of cliche' like trash child, having a fiance who wanna most likely break the proposal? not confirmed yet, gate guard whose mysterious and more powerful than the clan leader, mysterious dragon pet egg and lastly most cliche that mc isn't the real son of the family and his father was a big shot at a time and now the mc has big shot emimes because of that. So basically, this novel has every fricking cliche you can think of.Most irritating thing is MC's personality...he complaints every 2 dialogues, nah more like whenever he breathes. He's arrogant, foolish, brainless with no what so ever power or knowledge to justify his arrogance or foolishness. So, if you like being irritated or like this type of MC...go for it.Action scenes sucks very much I had to say and for a cultivation novel, its a big put off for me. Pacing is slow too like you can see even after what 40+ chapters...we haven't even seen MC's so called fiance.Characters are very dull, like his supposingly adopted father doesn't shows any affection for thr MC...only yelling and scolding even after he comes out on top of his family's other youngsters. only his mother loves him in his family probably and she isn't even his real mother idk yet (but main put off is that even after so much humiliation and struggle from his peers in his family, MC thinks of paying off the family by bring strong).I think that was all so my final thoughts? try first 5-8 chapters and this novel continues the same vibe so don't think mc will get better or story will progress, if you like that 5-8 chapters then this novel is for you, ty. peace ☮️✌️
I don't know where to begin, disappointed so much potential but the Author just didn't care much I mean why give the mc so much talent if his not going to used it, almost all increased of strength is because of external help either he use pills or magical powders I won't mind if he use it one or two times but everysingle time why does he even have a heavenly spiritual root and a supreme physique for and let's not forget how dumb the mc is, I'll just stop here caused it's just a wasted potential.