He knew how to flank her, yeah. But he knew what he was doing - mixing in feints with the sickles with martial moves of kicks and punches. Even if he doesn't score a real hit on her with those hard-light weapons, the body blows would whittle her down little by little even with her cultivated form.
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"Very well, I will go get ready."
Both of the creatures mouths snarled and frothed with agony and fury at being crippled by some random traveling scholar.
Great story definitely worth a read, although there aren't many chapters at the moment of writing, they are mostly full of individual content that makes each one worth getting.
The writing is great. The pacing could benefit from some improvement, but it’s mostly good.Story development however takes a toll on the writing. So far the story is a shallow description of her day-to-day activities. No much detail is presented besides a plain "she had some trouble, but overcame it".This also makes the character feel a bit shallow, because it limits the possibility of understanding and relating to her on a deeper level.World background is well done, considering the writing style and story depth. It’s enough to further explore and contextualize the world.It would be great to have more details on Emily's daily life.Keep up the good work, author!
Typical CN lunacy, MC claims they want a simple life, immediately starts running around being high profile without any logical concealment and then like a shit brained assclown is "shocked" when their identity is discovered.
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This book is amazing. Truly. A fresh plot with an interesting power system. The MC isn't full of plot armor either. I totally recommend it. The only issue I have with this book, which definitely dossapointed me, is the System of the MC. The system first seems super cool with its Destiny Points, but at the end of the day is useless or totally underutilized. Sure the MC uses the AI Module of the System 24/7 and its helpful but it doesn't use Destiny Points and kinda seems detached from the System when Apex describes it. From there he uses Destiny points only 1 time. 10 points to unlock his bloodline. From there he accumulates 1000+ and never uses them. He becomes strong and has a cool story but it almost seems like the system never gets fully utilized, which seems to be wasting the potential the System could have had
I like the way you describe the details , I just started reading it but now it's in my library . so don't become lazy and keep updating have a good day
Another fl that suffers, the story immediately begins not logically: the heroine is expelled, lives without money, wanders, but after 3 years, as if by magic, she returns ??u200d♂️ how did they find her? then, of course, she doesn’t tell anyone about the misfortunes she experienced, but ml falls in love with her and she, of course, forgives ?
I just wanted to let you know that I'm enjoying your story! This kind of genre usually hooks me, and you're nailing it. Keep up the fantastic work!