Loving the story so far, please add more detail when you create your world. KEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP IT UP!!!
It's pretty good I hope you can mass release some chapters though cuz I really like it good job author-San more please.......................
A very heart warming realistic fiction. The suspense part was very curious... especially when her father calls her .I mostly liked the character names which are so realistic...preetham and shristi.
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yo this is hilarious, anyone whose searching for a relaxing read give this a try. but not for those who searching literal masterpieces on webnovel. good read author.(only read 40 chapters so far, so rating might change later)
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This story is very nice . The MC’s character is different from other books . The natural way he acts makes it seem more realistic. it makes you understand or relate to the MC better .Considering that English is not the author's first language I'm quite impressed
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Good novel, I would love to see how the story progresses later on, good balance between action and the breaks. It’s is slow at first but you slowly get absorbed into the novel.
I got the feeling that this novel might be good because it reminds me of Leylin Farlier when i saw the word IMMORTALITY . zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz . And honestly though qidian boys , do i really need to put bunch of "Z" every time i comment since i can't comments if there isn't enough letters . Smh
Video games isn't my cup of tea but this story seems hella interesting! The concept seems unique and world building is pretty nice to.Synopsis is a great opening and it attract you to read the story and to find out about this unique universe.Great job!