Not the right guy to review a novel from fantasy-female genre. But, the story is unique than all other reincarnation and system novel with mc transmigrating into a body and the original owner guiding and putting mission on her head. The writing is good with smoothly flowing dialogues. Too early to comment on the world development and story development but what is shown till now hints that some great story is definitely cooking.
Congratulations, you've found dirt in the ocean..?????
I love this novel. Story, characters, setting etc are entertaining and plot moves at a good pace. I see comments about Author allegedly plagiarizing some others words. Frankly I did not notice any of that. Perhaps author can comment about being inspired by the various sources and encourage readers to check out the source work. Author san, please do not let this stop you from continuing your work. We are looking forward to see how this story ends and how protagonist keeps harem all together ultimately.
It's so good, keep it up, author, even if the updates are slow, the novel is incredible, I really hope you finish it. in all that once again it's too good ???
Yepp this is my first story! Please read it ??
[Seraph Gabriel… Partner don't tell me…] Ddraig said in disbelief
And i see my friend, my friend that usually accompany me to go to school.
"Shut up ball headed man if you say something that will make me displease then I will torture you"
"If you have a slight hope, you can even win the whole world"
Ethan:!! A Morningstar they are the strongest hunters what are you doing here
"I will." She said.
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