I believe there is a problem in the translations for this novel. The grammer and sentence structure can be confusing.I could not make it past a few chapter before giving up. I tried looking ahead and it didn't seem to get better.
I know the author on a personal level. So I might be a little biased. But honestly, this is a good story.I think the details could be improved and perhaps that would make this a gem. But id still read this. not because the author is holding a gun to my head( I assure you, he isn't) but because I like this story
The thing that stands out to me the most about 33 Risen is that the worldview of this story is really grand. I think most people are used to starting off slow with a tiny worldview and then having it slowly expand. But in this story, you're off with a blast right from the start! The protagonist is a kind of god and we get to know a lot of mostly supreme beings right from the beginning. Of course, there's a lot more to it than that, but I don't want to spoil everything here!If you're able to accept such a wide worldview from the beginning, I think this can be a very rare experience to enjoy. It takes a certain amount of daring and talent to pull this off at the start of the story, so I think silver did an exceptional job here. I hope everyone can appreciate it some more.Another thing that stood out to me is the 'openness' that some characters seem to have in this story. Okay, so I'll admit that given their setting and the kind of thought process that they should have at that age/background, it makes sense. It IS likely that gods that have lived for millions of years don't feel the need to have strictly defined relationships and are more comfortable with each other. But to be able to accept that mindset requires the reader to have a certain openness themselves, and I don't know how many can do it.I think this made me a little uncomfortable myself, but Silver did it in an inexplicitly tasteful way, and the main character himself does not partake in this so I think it's easier to accept.Speaking of the main character, I think Silver did a great job with Samsara! When writing a story it is very easy to make the main character without flaws, but Samsara has his ups and downs. You will feel both his negativity and positivity, and it makes him more human than most main characters, which is a bit funny considering he's not really human.Anyway, I think the story is definitely worth a try! I recommend not judging it just from chapter one. I know most readers are used to just looking at the first chapter and not continuing if they don't like it at the end of it, but I feel that this novel really starts to grow on you only once you've gone through at least a dozen chapters. I think if you're very impatient then at least give it 5 chapters, and if you have some time then read till chapter 13.
Love the story very much! Great and neat translation! Correct and clear words and usage! Grammatically correct and easy to understand! Overall, a great work!!
I love intriguing stories and the author has clearly put a LOT of thought into writing this novel. The most interesting thing about this is that the build-up to the tension actually asks more questions than answers and I am hungry for more. Cheers and I look forward to reading the next chapters!
Okay so I believe that the story has potential. However, the first thing I noticed which I feel is incorrect is your title. Why not try changing the title to this instead: Man, Monster, or God? . I suggest this because your title has a punctuation error as the comma's and question marks clash. Also, try using Grammarly to check for grammatical and punctuation errors, that way your sentences will flow smoothly. Overall, keep up the good work.
Hey there, author here xDIf you have any questions about the novel, you can leave reply here!1. First, I must say that this is my first attempt to write and create a novel, my only experience in this regard is that I have read tons of novel. So please, if you have tips, send me.2. The english language isn't my mother language, so if there are gramatical error or strange sentences, please let me know.3. How often are you updating? Well, currently I work as a freelancer software engineer — I need to make a living xD, so I'll try to maintain at least 1 chapter per day.4. What to expect? Comedy, dark scenes, heated enemies, ruined society, interesting worldbuilding and a unique cultivation system.
Not bad writing quality and an interesting set up. Good character development, even though author can still work on this section. Update stability is pretty good too. Pretty good so far, I will update my review again. (Don't take offense, my review looks a bit dumb).
read 25 chapters. I've always loved and been a fan of yandere novels so it wasn't a big surprise to check this one out. in addition the mc just dumped his fiance and now anticipating how she's gonna regret it is oddly satisfying. anyways it was worth my time reading. keep working hard author sama and don't drop this masterpiece.
its good.no need to explain further, read it...........................................................................................
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I think it is extremely well written so far and can't wait to see what is to come in the future. The writer is extremely good but I did not find anything that stands out overall