i really love the concept of different stories each chapter...the first story was a real twist that i didn't expect i really hope that the author keep up the good work
Keep it on u guy.really a grate full thought and creativity. Please make story much faster u can. I am seriously waiting for all the parts loving it loving amd the guys who are viewing please support him with star, stone, reviews & cmmnt this guy really deserves some respect. ❤️❤️Please support him i think he is a over coming author a beginner but with lot of talent
Over all 4.5 /5The story line is well written and it develops accordingly. Although it's a little bit early.The grammarbis fair enough.The character's are fine.The world background is well designed.And the update rate is excellent so far.
First of all, I think it's an excellent read, I didn't have high hopes due to the synopsis to be honest but I always tell myself not to judge without reading first.I don't have much to criticize due to the author's good writing, it is true that there are things that feel forced but as long as you read to enjoy and not to criticize, you will enjoy it.What does bother me is the waste of his ability, just thinking about all the abilities that have to do with the mind makes me go crazy as only focusing on simple cold weapons, the physical body is limited, the mind is infinite.In the martial world he had so many opportunities to learn more than just physical things but I'll let it slide considering that in the original world he needs strength quickly to protect himself.I sincerely hope you use your ability for what it is truly made for, MAGE, just thinking about future rune knowledge drives me crazy, if I were in your place knowing that everything I read will be perfectly in my memory, mage would be my first choice, focus on the physical when it is possible that other people have their respective classes in that, will only make you weaker
I really thought it would just be a knockoff and cheap version of TBATE that I would read to pass time, but this is actually good and I am invested.
I hope this Series will continue ive been looking for any good translation for this Light novel for almost a year now when i see one it cut just at chapter 268please continue this master piece :( let us know how the duoluo dalu series ended :(
i love it so far. pls continue. now i will spam g because 140 letters is the min ggggggggggggggggggtgggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
Good.
Alright this is my first detailed review ever.This review is until CHAPTER 39.First of all i am regular reader of this book and have been starting this from the beginning.Writing Quality- The writing quality is great, there are some grammatical mistakes but the author regularly corrects them. The fluidity of the dialogues and scenes flows really well. The vocabulary is also quite fitting.Character Design- The characters are hella unqiue and quirky, everyone has their own desires and appear to be full of life. Author also includes slice of life moments to make them appear more alive.Updates stabilty- Not the best tbh although in the last week it has been 1ch/day.World Background- Probably one of the best ever. It is extremely well fleshed out and has many layers to it. At the same time there are no info dumps we slowly get all the relevant info.Even a simple city get's enough development.Plot- Very strong and mysterious. It does not fall into the trap of cockroach and predictable villains. The characters have selfish motivations so dont expect saving the world nonsense.Protagonist- The protagonist is like no other but if i have to describe him in simple terms think of like an immortal senior reincarnated as a mortal. A regular old immortal i mean.All in all this is one of my top 5 stories on this platform. Author sama dont you dare drop this beauty.
No System????? No Arroggant Young Masters?????No Dog Mc?????No Braindead Characters?????No Hollow Side Characters?????Yeah nah, webnovel aint picking this, Im calling it right now. Therefore, I shall travel across the land of raws and mtls to seek pleasure in reading this novel
A story worth reading and seeing the ride. Itd be nice to have this translated.Hey at least this story stays consistent, a lot of novels with higher writing quality but disorganized and messy stories
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