Ussop
Another wonderful story that comes to end. thank so much my favorite author and looking forward to your next story soon. ...
thank you much next chap.
New chapters taken too long
Need more chapters
well this was different....
awesome please next chapter
great book but unfortunately not a finish book
Really love this book
Such a great read! From the begging to the end the author has you drawn in!
the story is getting interested...
Yes your are a talented writer and I love your books, please continue to write more great books. And everyone please read her books cause you will definitely fall in love with her book. And u can read them from beginning to end and updated does not take long, and please make sure you give her ...
Needed more character development. At one point I had to go back and re-read the last chapter as I thought I skipped something major however the story line was just disjointed. The book has really good potential with some editing and the above mentioned items being corrected.
