Really awesome. I couldn't find any problems with the grammar either. Hope I can continue to write cause I really liked this novel.Also can u make it such that the host is slightly op?The story hasn't developed too far so I wanted to see if it was possible.
I could not stop reading!!I must say this story surprised me!The author was able to provide us with such entertaining and worth it to spend my time with. A note-worthy story-telling!Must-Read!10/10
I will recommend other to try this .I really liked the way aurther way of writing.
Read 12 chapter of the story, and i can say I really found something interesting.No hi-fi vocabulary, simplified and easy to understand writing style...which is kind of weird.As an author myself, you changed quite a lot of my view about writing...I really mean it.Negatives-Pacing of story, and first chapter is kinda not that catchy... compared to the chapters you wrote ahead.Story... I won't say much about it since I only read upto ch 12.But so far, so good.Keep up the work
I am a dog and I love fried spring rolls dipped in sweet and spicy sauce! I also like your novel! Keep it up, write more and update chapters regularly!
This is not yours, I can see your thievery and smell your BS. You did not write this, instead stole this from another person, and made it your own. Do you know what that is called? That is called being a thief and plagiarizing on other authors work. This is not yours so stop posting stolen work as your own
I just think that the kingdom and world background could receive some more attention, like describe more the peculiarities of each area and economic/political importance in each area. As he was an explorer in his previous life and sell information about his discoveries he should know somethings.
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Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
I would really like to see this novel continue. After reading it for a while you start to get hooked on. The plot seems to be all over the place and there are many things the author just adds without any explanation. But you are still able to connect everything one way or another