IamTony
Okay, the story is there. you would be able to tell the writer has made the story carefully thought out. I like it, The protagonist is Set on destroying the world and escaping, even when he resonates with people, he doesn't forget his purpose. definitely worth read. I can see the potential.
My kind of genre. The book is really good except for some grammatical errors. Readers that love this kind of genre will really enjoy reading this novel. #transmigration #space #family #farming I’m hoping for some updates soon.
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Having read tons of novels (or at least parts of them), I'm kind of tired of the main character having the same reactions. I think that he should have noticed that he can't use a squirrel's or a ferret's body as soon as he took control. I mean that as in, he'll need practice since, as a human, he doesn't know how to walk/run on all fours, attack with claws or use/control his tail. What I mean all in all, is that the main character is pretty generic, not that smart or memorable.
once you get by the grammar issues, and there are a few in each chapter, it's a pretty decent book. I'm only on chapter 13 and I really like it.
You can tell it was heavily inspired by reincarnated with the strongest system still a good read only problem is the story isn’t very linear
Okay now, lets we continue.
"Today, is the day when justice shall be served. Not just for me, but for my sister, my father and mother, for Fallen Angels and those that these people had hurt, manipulated, used and killed. No need to mince any words then those that have already been said. All of you who are wathing this have come for one thing, and it shall be served to today: justice." Alex said in a fully serious tone, turning to the guards and motioning them to open up the doors leading into the dungeon.
Also to all who thought I'd kill Erik based on the title, fret not his time will come.
'Nope.'
Neighbors bring food with death and flowers with sickness and little things in between.
So what's wrong with taking the back streets?
