First of all, the writing style of the author hooked me in the very first page. And I still wonder his lively descriptions that adds more beauty and meaning to the work.
Some sentence have grammar mistake and wrong wording use. Still is is pretty readableHaving 2 types of power base : cultivators and magic is good as it make it easier for readers to remember them. All in all, not too bad for a post apocalypse novel with time travel.
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I will no longer remake this novel, rewrite the stars, and reverse fallen stars but I will still write Ms. Vampire Angeline 2: Red Chains as I promised and I will publish and write more of my books here in Webnovel. Thanks for understanding and reading my works. Btw, I've commented the ending of Reverse Fallen Stars on Chapter 105.
Hello all!As you can probably tell, I am the author of the Perfect Specimen. After getting my feet wet by writing over 15 chapters so far I realize how fun it can be creating a world and letting others explore it with me! I have many more novel ideas in mind but I'm trying to find my writing style so please if there are any critiques you have let me know! I don't have a glass heart and I will keep writing with all negative and positive comments in mind!Granted I would prefer the positive ones more!Hope you enjoy my novel, but most of all, thank you for giving it and me a chance!
This book seemed very unassuming but surprised me in the best ways and almost sucked the soles off my boots with the way it flatters my taste in reading. It does go a bit too much into information for my own personal tastes, but it doesn't escape the story for too long before you're sucked back in and latching onto the mc's carapace for the ride. I do love the matter-of-factly attitude of the mc and although every story crowns it's mc as the final survivor, I'm still gripping the edge of the seat with an iron grip of my clenched cheeks and awaiting the outcome of our beloved mc. Thank you Author for going through the pain of your mind uterus and giving birth to this beautiful story
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Slow paced story development with a good.character design , reincarnated male and female which is unique unlike other novels that full of.regrets with their past lives . I think it.is a fantasy based realm so i hope there would be another races like Highschool dxd with so many factions .
I enjoyed reading it, author. Hope you won't drop this story. It's well-written and engaging, so just wait for some time and I'm sure people will discover this gem. :-)Keep the good work btw!
Ask of now there is not alot of release so I will rate it as is. It's not bad. Kinda funny. I look forward to the story development. IS THIS YURI?
It's really good and well thought out but I want more chapters pls......................................................................................................................
5 stars cuz the author actually cares about readers opinion, and bother to reply to the comments.Now I just have to fill about 10 characters of nonsense to leave this review.