PeaceinChaos
2.2 stars and this is in first place in the vote.... nothing suspicious. ...........S....U...S
+- Perfection!
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Didn’t like generic system novels so much until I read this. Good writing quality, dumb MC who becomes a total savage, and overall nice world building, I love it. Keep up the work author!
nice can't wait for the next updates??????????????????????????????????
Love the story so far its has great plot and i will surely want to read it further. ??
writing quality 4: to many misplaced comedystory development 4: averagecharacter design 5: pretty well thought and interesting charactersupdating stability 4: averageworld Background 5: give enough information to be interesting but not enough to predict what's gonna happen
I don't like typical chinese cultivation,, but this story is rather interesting so i will let it off, but there is no character development though (everyone seems like a robot,[I specially hate that lily])
Love the webnovel, Amazing work, currently there's about 500 Ch for this novel which is not on here, but 5 stars from me for this novel, and this is some filler text just to meet review standards cause I don't want to give any spoilers, just go ahead and read it!!
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I have read till 60 chps and from what i gathered, the writing style is rather bland. Nothing interesting seems to happen and there is no x factor which makes u binge read a book. Or maybe it is a translation problem. Our mc is reborn in a village and he has 1 year (can be extended) to make a top magical academy or he dies. He is beither too strong or too weak. Just mehh. Personality wise, he is like a lazy dude who just goes through the same itenary everyday. So much so that it has become boring. Wake up- Teach magic to loli - attempt a dungeon -repeat. The writing style is so stupid that it skips the reward part of the dungeon after completion and subtly explains it in later chps. Come on, watching mc get cool rewards is the only reason we go through the dungeon clearing stuff and u gonna skip that?!! In later chps the mc suddenly does a magic or builds a academic building and dumps all its explanation on dungeon rewards. Its so confusing and irritating.His students also look like 1-d characters due to having no pov of thier own. If that's not enough, the mc is a "Good guy" who cant bring himself to kill people and helps people indiscriminately even if that means getting into the cliche troubles knowingly. The world is our typical western fantasy world with elves, trolls, etc. Apparently humans are not the dominant species and are lead by the magicians and the academies. Overall a slow and boring read for me. Maybe it might get better in the latter chps. Give it try. Maybe u might like it. If somebody have read it in mtl, plzz give me a idea of where it goes in latter chps the comments.
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