I need more!!!
Those last few chapters were real page turners!! Loved it. Excellent story.
love this book, can't wait for the new chapters!
I am so sorry for the confusion, Ethan is Joe's brother not Daniel!!!
Apologies...️
I enjoyed reading this story. It wasn't too long. I just wish it was a better ending on what happened after they got back together.
How often are there updates?
Love it … looking forward to complete it
73 chapters 4/13/23
I should have gone to sleep a long time ago…
Good short story. Might have actually been a little too short/condensed at the end, but still good. It does need some major editing. Jumps from first person to 3rd person view and back and some grammar and spelling errors. With proper editing and maybe another chapter it would be perfect.
i absolutely love it so far
it is short and sweet...loved it