"Dammit, move! Move!" the driver shouted as he savagely lashed the beasts in a panic, to no avail.
"Okay…you can go and clean yourself there, Silvie"
"What do you mean?"
"I see~ you finally notice it, well, it's a bit more hard to say and it's a bit secretive, but once more thought there is no losses to tell you this secret" the goddess finally agreed and beaming a bright smile 'her smile is always beautiful and melting your heart'
I dropped after chapter 7. When genius MC uses violence in conflict with group of unknown for him people, with unknown forces during the first days in new world, when his knowledge of world is minimal. Reading about idiot is not wha5 I want.
I read a few of the chapters and felt like rating the book. I can't say that I'm completely engrossed but I have to admit that the book does seem interesting.Looking forward to more updates
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Starting reading as a review swap but I must say this is a very good story. The characters interaction and sudden and swift transition between main characters is very well done. I can't wait to keep reading I thoroughly enjoy this quirky story. One of my new faves!!
I have barely any problems with the story that the other reviewers haven't already commented on like the synopsis and the characters but I recommend stack piling chapters because you need update more regularly
Havent read the whole thing, gonna give u five stars but bruh, who gives powers to the people around you but leave nothing for urself. People who have this power only wait to be taken advantage.
i haven't even read it yet but I'm going to read all 100 of these chapters just for you. I'm currently in the process of trying to make my own novel for WN and I would atleast like someone to do this much for me. sorry it didn't go well but I'm sure regardless of the preferences of WN users this novel is great
The Good: The editing rarely makes mistakes and the writing is straightforward. The story moves along at a pace that laughs at the slow pace Chinese stories love. The author seems to have a vision and is writing it. The Bad: We're definitely in wish fulfillment territory. The thing that seemed to take the longest was the MC getting his system. The MC borders on leaning on his plot armor and the 4th wall intentionally. Everything is kind of canned otherwise. Dateless loser? Quest to get one. Best friend shows up and immediately offers up his sister. Lots of things are explained by info dumps. The system is so helpful that the MC doesn't have to be smart. Multiple times the MC is in danger or is greedy and with a smile and raise of the hand, the system or the world bend to his will. I have put food effort into reading this, but even I have to stop after a few chapters to give myself a break. I've never seen MC struggle to overcome something and by now, I'm kind of tried of looking.The characters are uninspired. The author, as far as I got, worked too hard showing us that their talent was wasted telling instead of showing. Most of the author's weaknesses are in their interpersonal and cultural understandings.The greatest moment I encountered in the story, where the author was showing their spark, was when the FL spoke French. It was an opportunity for many things, but many, if not all, were wasted. The MC apparently spoke French too, a dead language, in the future, in an area with predominantly Chinese names. It could have been a moment to show the MC having a gap in his knowledge, and thus himself, or to use his skills or the system to overcome. Instead the MC was too cool for human weakness and was perfect. Yay.My final conclusion is that while I look forward to the growth of this author, I'll be looking forward to their next book, rather than more chapters of this one. Whomever their editor and proofreader is, they have my praise and I hope the author realizes the blessing they have.