Author let me tell you why you boycotted your own story at first for the early chapters, (I read until chap 27)can't speak about later chapters since I haven't read them, the wish thing is too big of a way to ask for power or destruction or whatever, the story's title is too big most of all when he doesn't get a speck as omniscient as I and many thought, I didn't want him op, but to me he feels too weak for what he asked, I can look past all that, very minor problems at the end if the Mc is good and interesting , that is the problem, you made reading him spiritually painful , he is very stupid, by plot if i understand and that is bad because reading what an idiotic character does is very irritating, you didn't even tell us why, you should have explained that clearly, maybe with a system window that he couldn't see at least then I would have had a reason to continue but you gave him the worst possible handicap being stupid and you gave the reason 50 chapters later?!!!? If you make a character like that and expect people to bear it for 1/4 of the story then I am sorry but I am out if you made him physically very weak but perceptive and cunning and with a helping secondary character (his sister, his cat, etc. ) that could help him fight and carry out the plans he strategizes it would have been an entirely different look but as I said you gave him the worst possible trait, making reading him insufferable
Overall a great story. Only thing I urgently request though is that the princess be killed off ASAP. Really too annoying. I’m in the 200’s now and I honestly don’t know why the MC puts up with her. Her presence makes things so complicated for no explainable reason. And she acts way to haughty for no reason. Only leads to mental demons and getting hurt. Really begging and pleading for someone to tell me if she gets killed off or separates cause from the way things are going it doesn’t seem like it. The story is good but then she opens her mouth and I want to delete the story from my library. Good thing the authors writing skills keep me hooked or else I don’t know what I would’ve done.
Another wish fulfillment story that stretches the plot in completely unrealistic ways .......................................... filler to post
The story has a pretty interesting concept but its done poorly; there are to many plot holes, not enough character or world development. .....
Wow, a quality novel, well atleast compared to the utter sub-human trash available so far.MC is an expert who died from tribulation and reincarnated as a young man in a new world.Due to the laws (not governmental laws, but spiritual/magical stuff) of the world he's in, he can't personally cultivate using the methods from his former world. Therefore, he must rely on his soul beast to cultivate, this is not an original idea, his soul beast is well known trash-tier, but with his OP past-life methods, it becomes stronger.The way it's portrayed so far is what grabs my attention, there's young masters, but they don't act like arrogant d-bags. The author took the extra step to explain the feelings of side-characters to make them different then the "Oh so you're trash, hahaha". If you read it, you can see the difference compared to the mass produced garbage.The world setting is pretty standard, yet the author takes the time to explain it, rather then giving us a cookie cutter template that we always see in other novels. He doesn't explain the world, but the differences in power systems between his former world and current. The MC is an expert, so don't expect any character development. He's lived a full life already.I haven't seen those cliché's where everyone mocks him on the daily, the attitudes and designs of other characters are different then regular novels.In conclusion, there's not much difference so far (Chapter 20) with this novel and others, all though the genre of pets is cookie cutter, instead of taking it straight out of the package like other novels, the author has decided to explain things and increase the depths of other things.Then again this is a C20 review, who knows if he goes full china #1 later.
Real Score: 3.5/5 (Because I Hate Webnovel's scoring system.)"A Genuinely Good Story that I'm not Going to Finish." Or "Pokemon for Teens, who want that Blood."First off, I'm going to say that I liked this book. And it was Ok. Would I recommend it? Not Really. But If you want some Teen-Pokemon action that isn't Cursed or a Edgelord's wet dream, then it's ok. Secondly, that's all I got. Look it's ok. Ya got cute Little Baby mons, and Rad looking Adult Mons. It's just pokemon set in a world where the story takes that concept seriously. And it's good up to ch 40. (because I don't want to pay for more, and can you really recommend something to anyone on that premise.) The story comes, dangerously, close to cultivation novel territory in the legendary beast ark but other than that, it's a fine little story.
haven't read a novel with a system like this, looks like it would be a good read? keeping my fingers crossed though. hopefully the author doesn't disappoint.
I get hooked reading the first chapter, the author does a great job of portraying the mc as a charismatic character. World background? hum. Kinda irked me how the universal empires only consisted of about 1500 planets, like I mean wouldn't that be more of a galactic scale? Maybe I'm just overthinking it, maybe the term 'universal' describes how massive the civilization is, either way, can't wait to see how everything unravels.
It seems fun and has potential.
This truly feels like a great start to a novel with evil MC. Since the start of chapter 2 there are already signs of mystery and the world that MC might have stumbled upon.... well can't say more than this... Blablabla...Wordwordoword... countcount count
Kinda sus that i cant find a single bad review...Either way it sounds good so maybe there really isnt a single 1 star aspect of the novel. Ig we'll see...
I dont like the fact that the mc lose his past memories because he is very naive afterwards and tells a random old stranger at the academy his secrets x)))))And he is way to friendly.. everything else is ok but the mc character is just trash in my eyes
It sounds interesting. Just don't know how the story will progress. It fine as long as it isn't forced plot but proper story. Hmm, by the way i am thinking how did he survived without eating or drinking and just playing game. Hope its good.