The story in my opinion is well written and flows in a way that makes it comfortable to read easily. and I liked how the story is progressing. The characters are unique and interesting, and the author seems to know what they are doing. The only complaint I would have would be that one chapter a day is not good for us:) please write 5 or more.We need MORE!Im just kidding don't be hard on yourself, it's all about quality! and you have it on your hands!
Turned out to be just another generic novel. Don't waste your time. Only dull, boring, monotonous, repetitive text. There are no plot, no conflict, no development. MC is extremely overpowered, his disciples are extremely overpowered. All storytelling is about MC spouting some vague random nonsense, his disciples will make breakthroughs, MC will get a rise in level, repeat million of times. Nothing else.
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I like it, however I don’t like how he’s coerced into doing things for the big clans.
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Look, this story is very hard to read from the get go. At the time I started writing this, I stopped fairly short into trying to read it sure to a lack of punctuation in sentences making it next to impossible to read. Honestly, I think I saw a single comma at the point I couldn't keep going from. If you ever get to editing it with appropriate punctuation I wouldn't mind trying again.
The book is overall a very good piece of work and is getting a good response in the growth in the views, the overall rating is also good. What a nice novel!
I seriously thought that story would be better with a MC who has a little bit of a dark side.
MC has too much plot armor from the start and first chapters are a little bit hard to read because of MC. Story gets better after the first 40 chapters and the characters become notable.
It's a new concept and I love to read very much. It is a good novel nonetheless.
10/5 would recommend!
In all seriousness though so far it is a great story. It has little to no grammatical errors and the author does give actual information on the skills the Mc currently has.
At the time of writing there hasn't been much world building as of yet but it is building up a good foundation for it to be built upon. Nana-chan is a good writer and does her best to deliver quality stories to her readers and makes you feel as if you are actually watching over the characters. With that said you do feel your emotions being directed at the characters and not at the author herself.
Very cool, I only don't like a few things, like you use authors notes a bit to much, the power system was explained in 1 chapter instead of throughout the story, but other than that it's good, I highly recommend.
I would like to preface this review by saying I thoroughly enjoyed the story. I would definitely recommend it to someone. I just think there is a minor issue that keep it from earning a five star rating.The first issue is not one that limits the story from being rated five stars. I have read up to chapter 220 and this issue was a recent occurrence. The author stopped including the main character status page after he leaves the beginner village. I have not seen the main character’s stats or the stats of his summons for at least 30 chapters and it is a little bit frustrating. The status page was the main way that the author showed the main characters progress in the story. But, although it seems that the author is limiting the usage of the status in the soul book, it is not a dealbreaker. I can live with it.The main issue that I feel limits the story from being five stars is the interaction between the main character, female lead, and slime. Iris, the female lead, is a beast tamer. She has raised a few beasts in the past. Apparently, treating the beast like a child is the best way to raise them because that is what she does.The other reasoning the author gave for the interaction with the slime is that it is family. I understand the justification that the slime is family, not a tool or pet, but that doesn’t mean it has to be treated like a baby. when the slime is kissed on the cheek every single chapter it’s pretty annoying. Also, the slime kisses the characters on the cheek every single chapter. Obviously, I am over exaggerating. But, when reading the story it feels as if that is the case. It got on my nerves a lot when I read the story. I understand that we treat our pets in a similar manner, but it was really cringeworthy when reading. Furthermore, the slime calls the main character papa and the female lead mama which is also very annoying. I’m pretty sure this novel has an R 18 tag, and these interactions make the story seem childish. It was frustrating to read in those moments to say the least.Overall, as I said in the beginning, I would still recommend this novel. Despite the minor issues, it kept me engaged throughout the story which is not something that happens with a lot of these web novels. I would definitely give it a try and see if you like it!
So far so good! MC is a little dense, the wife isn't much better, but the daughter sounds super cute. Two thumbs ? up! Hope the story continues!