30 chapters 5-5-23
they should clear misunderstanding between them lack of communication is hurdle in their love story
Loved the story.
im totally engrossed with this story...wanna see how Mandy will fall to Lauren as the story moves
I love this book and give it a 5 star rating
Great book!!! Your writing has improved so much since your first book. It went so smooth and the ending was perfect. The only thing I wasn’t happy about was chapter length but you deserve all the tokens. Good job Jane Doe!! Hit it out of the park again
This experience made me realize why I shouldn't delve into Chinese novels. They initially captivated me, but after reading 50 chapters, the repetitiveness became exhausting. I adore heartwarming stories without unnecessary drama, but upon uncovering chapter 85's plot twist (which involved no confession yet), and noticing that each subplot followed a similar pattern – be it someone pursuing the main couple being rejected, attempts to control the protagonist leading to their own subjugation, or misunderstandings delaying any progress – I decided to call it quits.
I wasted half a day on those 50 chapters, and in the end, I don't believe it was a worthwhile investment. I genuinely appreciate the translator's efforts, though, and it's not their fault for the story's shortcomings.
Edit: Apologies, I accidentally gave a 5-star rating on my mobile device. Honestly, I'm not in the right mindset to rate it, as I'm still conflicted about my feelings.
For everyone who want a review (100chp)
First of all the general aspect of the story
From the title you know
It's about a kid (with high fortune) found a white lotus (his cheating system) and so he's on his way to become the elden lord
The white lotus comes from a great magus that for unknown reasons got attacked and die
(Smth is missing with the idea of attacking the greatest magus bcz of an item)
From the beginning chapters you will know if this is your cup of tea
The mc is an orphan and got bullied but he take revenge very quickly (here comes the first problem..why the hell he attacked a nobel kid and more why the hell a nobel kid is without guardians)
The academy test was just like what you would expect from a cultivation novel (breaking the records and gets attention from the teachers)
For some reason the side characters are few and they're so normal written
The combat is magic with martial arts
7/10 mid Novel
Read for fun only
such an underrated and amzing novel. has it been dropped.?
good novel but long time up .
Literally an abomination of a novel.
Yeah, I think around chapter 222