The Swoerd which is the Mc/Charecter ibeter improvved himself nut Isuspect Staffsrts is to Magic branch and if is used as magic conductor or spell caster Staff arts and War Staff worts cheking out not ejecting hem because magic usin are what wands and Staffs should do .
the MCJust do not know yet provably
Preation is awsome skill , ask Rimuru . Tthe MC Does nt know .
I am... And it's bothering me so much
I Stop reading it, he was egoistic shit.
well since it`s my novel and i have been building the ideas inside my head for the past 6 years imma give my self 5 stars hopefully you guys enjoy reading my humble work its not much but thats my best so far.
bro comment MTL??
This story should have ended after the truth was discovered about the twins. Meghan should’ve had had her happy ever after. But now you adultery and betrayal and changed the whole direction of the book. On top of all that you’re updates are one chapter at time. It’s kind of disappointing.
I finished the book and it sucked. It started ok w grammar errors and shit. I started getting into it, then all of a sudden a lot happened too soon and shit went downhill for me. Still a good book if you’re not picky and don’t mind amateurs. Very disappointed w the ending and who she mated w.
very nice ... story. nice work
More updates. .... addicted to this story
Enjoyed your book actually passing thru violence Your book is amazing
Good write up
Love it so far?