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Just from the title of it, it would really intrigues the reader to be part of the adventure. I love it! Your book is amazing, from the way you write to the way you tell the story. I would want to be part of the journey of this??
Curse you author my heart hiccuped due to you! And that alt ending why!!!! Aughhhh Any one planning to read the comme ts to see how the short novel is guys its worth reading yeah it isnt too long but its good and gives you laughs and feels and theres angst and love its a good novel so enjoy it
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best novel i have ever read bro
A great story, can't wait to read more!!
This is a new novel and people will not remove their reviews of the last novel. Love the book and thought I should let you enjoy it too. Just leave a comment or a review of how much you like or dislike the book and I will most likly answer.
This novel is quite good but the stability is poor author makes too much novel but the chapters is less than 10 so i suggest prioritse this first and become more proficient at this before making another novel so when you make other you know how to write more exiting stories
the story is good and well edited, It was flowing smoothly and fun to read. it's characters have a well defined nature, smooth pacing and easy to understand.
Harem? Loli? Milf? Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem!
Fast paced without seeming rushed, he can love forever so he isn't in a hurry and remains low key, gets various techniques, the plot is q bit scattered until chapter 20, but I guess that's what happens when the MC can live forever and time rushes by.
Honestly the title itself just makes me want to give you five stars and the chapters in it are for one word. 'Juicy Honestly the deception is fun to read i just kinda wish the development of the manslut was a little slower paced but then again for chapters strong so do what you want! Honestly it was fun and I felt kinda shameless reading it here with my cat and my fluffy grey blanket. Almost the feeling of watching an interesting set tape only its people you dot know and while you know you won't get caught and get the perverboal han slap bipitty boppity what's it you feel weird.mixed feelings here in an awesomely weird way!lKeep writing and we the shameless will keep reading in our respective dark corners around the world author sama!
When I found out you were the author of purple lighting emperor I was shocked because this novel does not compete it’s not great why you might ask first the story isn’t anything new or refreshing or a different spin on the reincarnated system genre but that’s fine my issue is with scenes that lack actual human emotion for explains the death of his parents it was breezed over pretty fast for the MC second his knowledge he has as gamer just seems to not exist at least up to chapter 23 and if it does and I missed it by chance it holds no actual vaule. Third the 4 year time gap seemed useless to his actual growth your telling me he can gain the skills of all monsters he beats and level faster by just absorbing energy and he still not 7th rank or higher to be honest when he was with his family I thought he was held back because people might see it weird he got that strong now he’s free to do what every with Two dragons with endless potential and skills above his and he underperformed. I think you get the point now character what can I say we don’t get to see much beside quick scenes of anger happiness or sadness with no in depth of those emotions it’s just typed. World it’s pretty ****** 5 city’s that matter and a continent and a beast forests. This novel is for a light read if anyone wants to check it out but I just found a few moments annoying like what’s the point of giving MC OP **** and say they have knowledge of being a ***** with gamer experience or just life experience but they don’t become gods when they can literally do that in a short time frame
