TouchofDarkness
Keep up the great work ! An exhilarating adventure filled with twists, danger, and unforgettable characters. A thrilling journey that keeps you on the edge of your seat!
This book is very unique and interesting ??,I love it❤️❤️.The way the writer uses word play is very wonderful. The combination of mythology and normal life is what got me tripping over this book.The book makes me forget about all my worries, it's just like I'm teleported into the book world and I'm experiencing it first hand I love it ❤️
this is beyond what I expected, when will the story continue
Hi, I'm InkwellDreamer! Urban Tux is a pretty cool web novel. I like the characters and the story a lot. Sometimes it gets a little slow but it's still fun to read. Tux is awesome and the writing is good. I think it's a great read for anyone who likes adventure. 4.0/5 stars.
it's a good story to read and I promise you that you won't regret it
As an author, I'd just like to just remind you to be careful when using AI with your story. I know it's very tempting, but the reason people read your work is for your own unique, human style. Your writing is obviously partially, if not entirely AI.Now, there's nothing wrong with using AI to help you generate ideas and outline your story, and even help structure your chapters, But please be very careful in using it to write your chapters. Just simply: don't do it.If you can, I recommend writing the whole chapter by yourself (I know it's not easy, it takes me 4 hours to write 1000 words) and then when you feel you can't improve it any more, put your complete chapter into AI and ask it for improvements. (Let AI check your work, not you checking AI's work) From experience, readers have a near unlimited amount of books to read; they want to read a human's hard work (they want you to bleed for them), not a book generated by AI.Anyways, there's a lot I can talk about in terms of plot and story, but I don't think that very suitable right now. (I've already rambled a ton)I don't want to discourage you, I think that writing's an awesome thing to do! That's why I gave 5 stars. In fact, if it wasn't written with AI, I would be ranting about how incredible the writing is. Purely put, the writing is *perfect*, much better than mine! It's at the quality of a top veteran writer, unbelievably perfect, and apart from the plot, has literally nothing to be improved upon. (And obviously, this level of writing is going to turn some heads)Anyways, feel free to delete my review if you don't want it on your book. Don't let me discourage you! (Actually, I'm expecting this review to be deleted, that's what I would do haha) The target audience of this review is you, nobody has to see it ^^If you want help or further feedback on your writing feel free to send me your handle, I'd be happy to help.
Just Passing by . .
This reads so much better than book 1 and I can't get enough of Sane! Excited to see where their little adventure takes them. Please keep writing!!
somewhat awesome in stealing others women, keep it up!
So much potential on this one!Based ahh MC who uses his rizz to bag a harem and will yap on his way to the top. Looking forward to more interactions with women, and especially the NETORI since the author wrote Stealing Spree as well!
Amazing book, should definitely check it out!
Very good book enjoyable to read highly recommended
