I only read until chp. 40 so i cant say how its afterwards but its quiet good, nice written and good development but there are also plot holes, the most glaring is how his identity was found out which makes no sense at all.How do you want to make a background check of an In-game character, whoes data are guarded by an high tech AI and the officials dont give out information + the hunted one gives no clues out about his identity... that is one big glaring plot hole.
This story is just another great story that our author made! Can’t wait to see more of this story! It’s going to be great reading this, wonder what the future chapters of this story will be like?
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IT'S A DISAPPOINTING NOVEL, YOU BETTER NOT READ IT BECAUSE IT'S JUST TRASH AFTER THE FIRST 50 CHAPTERS. In little words it's just a plagiarised novel that at first start with a system but then around chapter 50 the MC becomes so dumb that completely forgets about the system, and all characters and the plot too are the same as that of martial world with slight differences. If you want to waste your time for a trash like this then good luck. though the first 50 chapters weren't bad, unfortunately we can do nothing.
grammar is worse than mtl its the thing that made me stop reading this.decent potential but you need an editor and proof-reader/////
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great book, if possible, can you translate and upload the rest of the book or even the rest of the series? ecceleraitor and hamazura are dope and i want to see what haapened to touma
It gives off a feeling of calmness and genuine peace but then there is a mystery aspect of the character and the tone shift was sudden but not bad. The plot moves well and smoothly and the pacing isn't bad. I enjoyed it.
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I've read like 30 chapter, can only say that MC is a chunnibyo always saying cringe line, the fight are similar to Pokemon with CN version. There's also this "weird" rival with apparently protagonists look and might so MC doesn't rly like him 'cause to him he's too arrogant, though he himself is too "-" Anyway, it could pass time but not really a must read.
Well to be honest i saw a lot of potential on ur history but i don't like the type of mc that i've saw. Hi tries to be some kinda of Captain America like but this is not the type that i like. So to summarize the author either is sadic or want to run totally from any sign of a edgy mc. To be rlly honest everything i liked except the mc just not my cup of tea.
it's freaking Awesome ?, i love absolutely Everything, everything about this novel, (except for the update, although that's an issue only after reaching the 213th chapter)The MC is Kickass, the characters are awesome, the story is smooth sailing, the background is great, everything is Perfect. it's a must read??, I highly recommend it????❤️