Yes! Now, the only thing missing is GDBBM. On another note, I thought you decided to stop translating this novel because of some issues, Misty. Can we expect that this will be translated 'til the end?For those looking for a review, have you read 'National School Prince Is A Girl'? If so, this novel was penned by the same author. Expect epic face-slaps, whining white lotuses, overbearing ML, overpowered pets, artifacts-- enough said, basically everything belonging to the MC is OP. So what are you waiting for?
I was really enjoying the whole story even though it’s a piggyback from Wanmei Shijie (Perfect World) up until they ruined the image of Willow God (FMC i’m assuming).Around close to CH 500 or 500+ the writer or translator made her from classy, ethereal and pure to needy, clingy and demanding. I get that you’re venturing out as your own story but at least have the decency to be consistent if you’re basing a character that is revered by many from an existing character. Even though romance or relationship development ma not be the author’s forte but at least make it believable instead of wham bam sticking your tongue down your throat (literally what Willow God did to MC after he reluctantly accepted her proposal, massive invasion of space but what do i know).They’ve done such a good job along the way but decided to be like every other novel by poorly written romance of the MC which is such a huge let down. I seriously don’t get WHY they have to add romance when they have hard time conveying feelings and emotions between characters. Not even taking grammar and misgendering of the characters, don’t even get me started. ?Will i continue to read it? Probably since i already paid for most chapter.
pretty good can't wait for more chapters .
It feels like the story is adventurous. The writing quality is good, and the world background seems fine, too. For other things, the chapters are few to evaluate. I hope the author will publish a chapter faster.
Saw female Mc, interest peaked. Good read, and interesting theme. Recommended to all.
I read a few chapters and really liked the start, great storyline author, everything with demons and beasts is always great!!Can't wait to read more!!
that's an amazing novel. but why there is few chapters. author san pls upload more chapters
I like the story very much can't wait for more
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It's not going to be everyone's cup of tea, so I won't lie and say it's the best novel on this site. Give it a read, if you aren't interested in the first ten chapters then you probably won't fully immerse. However, I must say it was worthwhile writing this, so I'm sure it's going to be worthwhile for some of you to read this as well.Review:World Background: As of now not much about the world has been explored as it is still very early into the plot. Though I have plans of creating a massive world with its own history and politics, we will have to wait and see if I have the ability to deliver.Writing Quality: Though I speak English often, I am not a native speaker. That's to say, my writing is readable, but not impeccable. However, I don't believe that it takes much from the quality of the story, but you will notice a few errors here and there. Story Development: The pacing is rather on the slow side, though it is to be expected with the type of story I am trying to create. As of now, not much has happened in the plot, but it is indeed beginning to thicken,Character Design: I try my best to give my characters depth, and though it does not show now. I have already set the foundations for future character growth and hence dimension.Overall an average story told by an average author. Though you would do well not to assume you have any clue whatsoever where my novel is heading. The media I consume is vastly different from that on this site, and my end game will go in a different direction from most third-rate work that is devoured here.Happy reading.
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Quality-wise: The novel actually has a lot of punctuational and descriptional errors, therefore, I rated 3 stars. I suggest that the author uses Grammarly, It will improve the overall writing quality of the novel.Story: The story is still confusing with only 3 chapters out. Therefore it's still too early to judge whether it's good or bad so I rated it 3 stars. Neither too high or too low.Character Design: The characters are fleshed out at the start. We know some of Sia and Sid's (Main Characters I think?) traits so I gave 4 stars World Building: As for this we somehow know that Sia (MC) traveled to the future from an accident. Apparently, there are colonies and space travels in this story, so it is a definite outer space and sci-fi novel. However, again the novel only has few chapters out so it's really difficult to rate this right now so I just balanced it out to 3 stars. I'll revise my review in the future depending on the progress of the novel.