Okay ,I read the prologue and it's something which i wanted to read, simplicity on your writing is best , looking forward to read the whole book in one go......
Sweet and short, but the epilogue came out of nowhere.
*Means, my bad
I have finished reading all your story books they are very interested please l need another story
engrossing...
Made my skip a beat ...️
Needs continuity fixed, bit of grammar issues, the language seems forced at times. Someone with editing skills should be able to make it readable. The bones are there just needs fleshing out.
i cant stop reading it, it gives me inspiration and enthusiam everytime
"An absolute page-turner! This novel had me hooked from start .
the story is very interesting
The novel seriously lacks a compelling male lead. The protagonist seemingly becomes the sole virtuous man in the world, surrounded by a harem. It's tolerable if the main character doesn't possess an arrogant, delusional belief that he's akin to Haruto or Rio. However, a major plot inconsistency arises when Haruto holds a grudge against Lucius for the death of Rio's mother, despite her demise being an unfortunate act by a deranged individual. It doesn't make sense for Haruto to go to such lengths for revenge over a deceased child he barely knew, leading to questionable logic.
Thankfully, the supporting characters are well-developed and provide companionship for the protagonist, alleviating his loneliness. However, these friendships remain platonic, avoiding the issue of the main character being portrayed as the only acceptable male while others are portrayed as inferior or immature, reinforcing the initial premise.
This tale revolves around an individual who possesses the extraordinary ability to have multiple bodies, and the storytelling is executed exceptionally. If you seek a power fantasy where the main character simultaneously embodies the hero and the antagonist, then this narrative is a perfect fit for you!