so far even tho it's only 3 chapters in as of writing this, it's looking pretty good and it's funny aswell. the background and world building is pretty sold so is the writing/spelling which is what I Determine to be most important. so far it's pretty good.
Uhm no tags no synopsis I don't know what the story is about so can you add that it would boost your novel views
Author has potential. Story is quiet short in Chapter 1-12 but it gets longer in Chapter 13+, I would say, this is a very nice read as long you was able to keep up in the pacing of very early chapters. I do absolutely adore of the character of Alex ^^) keep up the good work
It is good. Keep it up and please don't drop this
Author's Note:I just wanted to take a moment to address you, the reader, before you dive into the story. This isn’t just a warning; it’s a heads-up. If you find yourself sensitive to certain topics or are easily offended, I would advise you to think twice before continuing. My book touches on matters that may be unsettling to some, and I don't shy away from exploring those darker, more complex aspects of life.Now, if you’re expecting a typical “good guy” as my main character, this might not be the book for you either. My protagonist is far from perfect—he’s deeply flawed, driven by ambition, and doesn't always make the choices you might root for. He’s not a hero in the traditional sense, and he won’t be a knight in shining armor. He’s human, which means he’ll show emotions from anger to happiness and everything in between.So, if you’re looking for a robot of a character who doesn’t feel anything, then you may want to move on. But if you’re open to exploring a complex, driven individual who’ll stop at nothing to achieve his goals—no matter the cost—then you’ve come to the right place.Thank you for picking up the book. I hope you enjoy the journey, but please, approach with caution.
Good novel but the chapter is too short.the power system is great and the abilities are very good watching for the future .the mc ability is strong but i want to see author ability
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it's a really fun novel and you said that this is no harem then i think you should add that tag because people are really attracted to that tag people like me
A very nice story so far, it's quite interesting to see the twists and turns here and there. But the death of Alice is something to be sad if, I wish she wasn't killef
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This book has enough action to keep your imagination running wild. I highly recommend ?
I like this story so much it is on my must read list. The translating quality it is the best as well.