pretty neat
this is a boring novel.. the MC is soooooooo dumb he makes my phone lag when I'm reading this.. the system is irritating and the whole vibe is just down the drain.. let's not butter up this novel it sucks
I have read over 100 chapters, which maybe a-lot or maybe its not that much, but I can only say, "What a waste of time!". The writing is quite poor, the plot is not very rational many-a-times, and it feels very contrived, especially the tension and conflict. Very disappointed, of what I've read from Er Gen, this and ISSTH have similar problems, while his only novel I enjoyed is AWE and thats because of the early part of the story basically up until the end of the Night-crypt arc and Bai Xioachun as a main character.All of his novels have problems but AWE is much more lighthearted so I don't care as much, however this novel is not like that which only adds to make me feel even more annoyed. Basically reading this is an exercise in self-mutilation.
Haven't read this yet but the author's novels are all good. I just hope for a fairly smart mc. Extra words to fill word count. Extra words to fill word count.
I usually don't read novels that are less than 500 chapters, but I've been short on good novels to read so I picked this one up and am not disapointed. It's a good read <3
The MC Should not start to kill police officers without any reason. The MC mistakenly killed someone and to escape from the police he started to kill. Dude this is not how it works. Change the plot. Either the MC should know that he is killing Felons or the MC and Police should both be a part of the escape program and the bullets are fake. An MC should not go on a pointless killing spree of Police Officers. A MC is like a light(maybe he shines in the light or hides in the darkness). An MC can never kill innocents. This goes against the rule of Protagonists. Or You can also change the crime of Mc and make it that he killed a corrupted high level official and when the police force tries to catch him he only kills the ones who have been corrupt or are up to no good(His system can help him identify the type of police officer the person following him is). This can allow the MC to stop killing innocents and also allow most of the plot to go unedited.
Disclaimer not a review just a rant on dumb reviews cause I hate confrontation. I do however recommend this novel, so read it if my rant has any persuasion on you.I would give it a little less but people are rating 1 stars because they cannot read clearly. They get mad he took 3 years to break through to golden core realm, for a reference the dragon princess took about the same amount of time, with the MCs total cultivation time an average genius would be peak 1st realm about to break through 2nd (golden core is 3rd). They say he has no cultivation talent no sh i t he would have been accepted into any other peak if he had any talent. There was one person who complained about him being a little sheep and beta male since he easily accepted his master as his master when he had no idea who he was. You do realize he is the only disciple on the peak and would get all the resources right? This is said multiple of times. Even if he didn't get all the resources did you want him to leave and never cultivate or how about beg to be accepted into another peak where he has to be a janitor just to cultivate the worst technique there is (MCs master gave him the best technique there is for the sect).
Finally a system novel that has a new take and isn’t super op or cynical yandere or tsundere or sadistic etc hope the author keeps this pace
This novel started off very good where the MC was part of a city where everyone got teleported to a new world and they had to survive altogether. The city ultimately got overrun but MC went back in time and received an ability to upgrade himself through contribution points from changing the future. But then, two major flaws appeared as the chapter count got higher.1) Instead of focusing on growing stronger, the author decided to go all investigation of this and that, causing the novel to move sideways. Writing filler arcs are fine, but it's not fine when it goes on for 50 chapters.2) The author keeps throwing wikipedia info dumps whenever he/she can. Like our MC would slice apart a bus to throw the metal at monsters. But before he actually throws, there would be a paragraph on how the bus was made and what type of materials were used. And this happens constantly and becomes annoying as the story progresses.Those two things completely lowered the quality of this novel but I still recommend a try.
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Its a good book I like how the characters ability and the fact he doesn't hide his cultivation. But the fact that it took 4 chapter from 13 to 16 to just re describe everything that just happened all over again make me want to
The book is interesting and I love how it all started. this is a good fan-fic and I hope to read more... keep it up author. The sky's your limit ??