Nicely written story with a good introduction to the characters and world.
The story definitely has potential. The MC is very ruthless and meticulous _ something I really like rather than a softie hero-wanna be MC. He also kills and even does it with a smile. From what I can tell there is clearly a very dept history about his background. The writing quality also isn't very bad but can definitely be improved. The development of the story also seems to be going through a very good route. As for the world background it seems interesting enough but we are still only at the foot of the story, I hope this will become a very amazing novel and please, update more huhuhu, 2 times a day isn't enough for me anymore
I'm telling you, this novel is good. But this is a translated novel from Chinese but I really like the translator. You change the Chinese name of the protagonist and many things. which i agree Think about it in the original novel telling him that he was an orphan and was taken by his family. Guardiola adopted But the protagonist's name is Chinese. God, you were adopted by a Spaniard but your name is Chinese. Just thinking about it, you can see the writer's brain.
You should also make a spy network which is solely in control of king as there are many traitors or betrayers in the kingdom. In many cases, arms generals or nephews seize power and make the king a puppet ruler line fromn1542 to 1565 Rama raya made Sadasivam raya (the legal ruler) puppet ruler.In Battle of Talikota, which had seemed an easy victory for the large Vijayanagar army, instead became a disaster as two Muslim commanders (Gilani brothers) of the Vijayanagara army betrayed and switched sides and turned their loyalty to the united Sultanates during critical point of battle.
The MC is very stupid and all the side characters are almost as useless as him. I just feel sorry for the people who paid coins to read this trash. All in all, I wouldn't recommend this to anyone.
I READ THIS BEFORE BUT I FORGOT THE TITLE (AHHRGG SOOOO ANNOYING)
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I just loved it! Though your language is a bit harsh but I love the plot and the way you explained. Book cover is also very cool and I kinda like it. Great work author-kun! I appreciate it!
Great start to a new must read book hopefully. The mc has started to be fleshed out well and developed nicely. Curious to see the route the world building goes. Hopefully this book continues and doesn't get dropped like most start ups.
dont read this, mc super beta, he collects a lot of girls but doesn't do anything, even when he sleeps and is hugged by some girls he still refuses to do it lol....
It's pretty good. The beginning had me on the edge of my seat so I'm looking forward to the future of this novel. Also, hope there is no romance cause I'm not a big fan of it
just wow!full transparency I was only looking for a book to read as a filler story while waiting for other novels in my library to update.Instead I have found myself completely immersed into the authors story here and now find myself hoping for additional chapters every time I open the app!The pace of the story is on point, actions and reactions are realistic and the MC isn't an invincible character that will get out of every scenario unharmed.The story is unique and there is world building happening in the background that comes to light that you realize the world is so much bigger than the MC realizes I am going to have to check out the authors other novel to see if I love it just as much as this one