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This is an excellent novel to read, I would recommend it to everyone.
can't wait for more
great chapter..can't wait for more!
I loved this story
Nice read but to expense for some who don't work
This is an amazing read , in love with your stories , this last chapter had me on edge , I would recommend this story if you are about to start this is a great read
Absolutely love the book
I do like this story it's so intriguing how the good boy turns into playboy! Yah but I like his new version. But still I'm feel his pain inside..
love the new to chapters when r u going to update
I have to talk about Yu Yue's voice because it is genuinely one of the most entertaining narrative voices I've encountered. She's sharp, self-aware, and has this dry humor that cuts through every scene. Take this moment: 'Just moments ago, she had already made up her mind—she would give birth to the baby in her belly. Additionally, she intended to find the man from that night. Therefore, she didn't want to get entangled with her ex-husband any further. If possible, she even wished she could hack into the civil affairs bureau and erase the marriage record between her and Fu Jingyan.' The casualness of 'hack into the civil affairs bureau' after discussing pregnancy and divorce like she's planning a grocery list — that's comedy gold. And it's completely in character. She's not dramatic about it. She's pragmatic. She's already three steps ahead while everyone else is still figuring out what's happening. Her dialogue with Fu Jingyan is also fantastic. 'Mr. Fu, there's no need for such formalities. If you have something to say, just say it directly.' Polite, distant, but with an edge. And then: 'Our marriage was always about mutual benefit—you survived, and I got what I wanted. So, neither of us owes the other anything.' That line is a scalpel. She's defining the entire relationship in one sentence and then closing the door. But the real dialogue win is Old Madam. 'Yueyue, men should be ordered around like this.' Said with 'a smile that crinkled her eyes.' The grandmother's voice is warm, traditional, slightly oblivious, and completely distinct from everyone else. And Fu Jingyan's silence — his '…' responses — speak volumes. He's a man who barely knows how to communicate with the woman he's married to, and the dialogue makes that ache palpable. The author's dialogue is natural, layered, and each character has a completely distinguishable voice. No one sounds like anyone else.
Jake is perfect. Damn! I enjoyed all the steamy moment he is having with Hailey. I'm sad I have to wait for bonus to read
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