Interesting storyline. the plot is rather unusual. I wonder what will happen next? this is not a typical fantasy story! Please keep updating <3
This book is insane ? great story about man with his past reincarnation in his body and item creation system. His easy control losing is great and sense of humor is perfect.
I saw, I clicked. Amazing one of a kind mc with a mind-blowing story. Lots of laughs and cant wait for more! Who knew you could clean and cultivate at the same time? Thanks author for teaching us to make this world a neater place xD
please reconsider your decision...your story is good , please continue post the New update story
This my fellow readers is great book and i very much recommend it for you. The writing is extremely strong and fluid, the characters are interesting and once you read it, it shall leave you glued to your screen????
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Just up to chapter 85 at the moment, felt like I had to leave a review for other readers to an accurate expectation of the novel.**SPOILERS BE WARNED**The intial world background in the first 20 chapters is rather good, however there are quite a few inconsistencies that come about later on. One example of this is the specific money the exclusively use in other continents. This however, doesn't really explain what they DO use instead of this 'mage currency', or in general the setting of which normal people live. The MC later also says he can just imagine the currency into reality and yet he continues to look for his opponents money after defeating them.Another problem is how fast paced and overpowered the MC got got, sort of destroying story development as theres just not enough time to get to know the other characters well enough.Another issue is the most blatant is the characters dialogue, grammer and in general the writing. The potential of this novel is great however the bland dialogue and bland personality of side characters such as the MCs apprentices is just horrible. Just a few chapters in we got to know there specialities but that all the individuality they have. They continues to say things 'at the same time' in sync but the amount of times this has happened is just lazy writing at this point. In contrast the Mcs creations happen to be more interesting than any other character.The last issue I find is the pacing, currently the MC during chapter 85 is at the power level he should be at chapter 250, the immediate growth and powerhouse he becomes after entering the world is just offputting and feels more like a brief power short book than a actual novel.Overall the novel is subpar, it could go far however the issues involving the pacing, poor writing and lack of interesting individuals leads to a lesser than average read.
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This manga has a nice progression, with good development.Translation is mostly flawless with a few mistakes here and there but nothing serious. Overall nice to read and enjoyable.
It is original at least to me. It is mysterious and makes you wonder who the character is his past and what his future holds. The story is just beginning so can’t say much else but it has potential hope author keeps writing it and doesn’t stop.
Rather cliche system story, but that doesn't mean it's bad. What I dont like is how bad the grammar is and there is no improvement in fact i feel like it got worse, and since there is nothing new and interesting about this novel I'd rather not have to struggle to decipher what the author meant.